Julius, a twenty-year-old law student, suddenly finds himself trapped in a void where the color white reigns supreme... A place full of nothingness... In that realm of emptiness, Julius meets a mysterious man who informs him of his death and the reason why he has found himself in that empty void.
When Julius found out about his death, the memories of his last moments of life flooded his mind. After Julius remembered his own death, the mysterious man introduced himself as Melius, the God of Light and Creation.
Melius was in a predicament, he had been sealed in that white void. He offered Julius a deal; Destroying the seal that imprisons Melius in exchange for the head of the one responsible for Julius' death.
To make this deal possible, Melius was going to reincarnate Julius into the world he rules over. Having nothing to lose, Julius agreed to this and was reincarnated into another world.
Neither the mortal, Julius nor the immortal deity, Melius would be able to predict the impact of their deal in this new world, its people, and its gods... Even the neighboring worlds might be affected, including Julius' former home, Earth.
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The first arc will be entirely focused on Julius' first years in the brand new world he was reincarnated into, as well as other mysteries about his reincarnation and how he navigates life in a different world.
Release schedule: One chapter a week. It mostly depends on how busy I am and my progress with the chapter. I will try to release the chapters around 10:00 PM - 12:00 AM CET.
I will ping on discord when a new chapter is released, so please join if you want to be up to date with any new chapters.
Here's the link: https://discord.gg/uH6APbzrFR
PD: The Smut with MC will start at a later point in the story. The story will also be a tad bit slow in the beginning.
Thank you very much for reading!
What happens when a demon boy has a charisma stat that's way too high? This story is one such follow through with that premise.
The author's answer seems to be a world of pedophiles. Sisters, aunts, and even goddesses aren't immune to falling in love and wanting to marry him. I think the only one untainted by the charm is the mom. And he's not even a preteen in age. It's really creepy and uncomfortable. I keep jumping through the chapters hoping for a time skip to make it more appropriate, but it seems not to be.
Sure, there's some other plot about saving the world from a bad guy that I'd like to read about, but it feels like the vast majority of chapters consist of women or little girls fawning over the main character while exclaiming "he's so cute!" Despite most characters being female, somehow the story fails the Bechdel test. I probably shouldn't have expected otherwise from the Harem tag, so that's my bad for expecting women with thoughts outside of "I want to better myself so MC will love me."
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This novel is quite mediocre, the author loves info dumps and he doesn't understand the concept show don't tell he constantly explains every single thing, thought and action by every single character at every single moment and constantly changes POV to the point you can't keep track of who's who.
He constantly creates needlessly prolonged dialogue that sounds like a conversation in the head of a three year old. The character dynamics are silly and unrealistic. The magic and aura systems are shallow and are often useless since it doesn't matter if a character is a master all it takes is standing in the rain to bring down even the strongest people to their knees since getting cold is enough to defeat the powerful elite.
Not to mention the main characters constantly act like idiots I'm not sure if they are all meant to be idiots or the author isn't capable of writing a character with an IQ greater than a middle schooler.
there are so many plot holes and ass pulls that this novel is just a joke I couldn't keep reading after the thirtieth chapter even when I tried to ignore all the glaring flaws.
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Just a hair under 100 chapters and the MC is still a kid!!! The tags for harem and smut are anywhere from 200-400 chaps away. If you are reading for the smut and harem, don't bother, unless the author does a time skip, which is doubtful due to how slow the author is progressing the story, as well as the author not putting anything out for 2 months, either the story will be dropped or the MC will hit adulthood by Dec 2024 maybe. In my opinion this story is not worth my time and should have time skipped to a point where the MC could have been an adult.
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Well, it is a cute story about growing up in another world. With a revenge waiting to happen and the people around the transmigrated person being onto him. The story is told from multiple poofs and the extra characters don't have that plastic doll feeling to them that most have in web novels, which is good initiative on the side of the author.
However, the style needs a lot of work. The chapters are long. About 4k-5k long. And, while the paragraphs are small ones, that doesn't take away from the fact that the chapters are walls of text.
Still, the prose is good and there is a moderate among of exposition given with vivid descriptions and rich dialogues. The grammar is also good and, although some frequently used phrases were either out of place or too repetitive, or both, in one case, the author did their best to bring variety and make the use of words such as said and ask a minimal one.
If you like isekais and litrpgs, then this one won't disappoint you. As it faithfully follows the troupes of those two genres.
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I really enjoyed it so far. This not my usual fare but periodically I like to read new things to keep things interesting and this has worked out well for me. There were some minor issues early but things have gotten better as the story has gone along. I read to be entertained not to be the literary or grammar police so you'll excuse me for keep this review nice and shallow.
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As a premis this is good so far and even better out side the norm. I hope to see some trope's being use but in odd or not normal ways.
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