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Average Words: | 1,680 |
Pages: | 135 |
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All in all, a good and promising start and seems to be worthy of the explosion I've saw (can't say I'm not a little jelly >w>). Hope the author can soldier on and continues to enjoy writing as much as I enjoyed reading~♥
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Definitely the work of a beginner author.
Often fails to consider what certain actions say about a character, such as the father demanding his supposedly sick daughter come to his study after suddenly waking up from a coma, and then acting as though he's beside himself with worry and concern over her health.
Also shoe-horns in enemies just for the sake of keeping up the battle tension, without rhyme or reason, such as having a random wild monster that is stronger than any other monster in the area just so happen to appear out of nowhere after they have finished up with a battle that was actually alright up until that point.
The author just seems to be throwing ideas together and does not quite consider how they make things appear or whether or not it makes sense.
Don't want to be too harsh because the writer is very obviously a beginner, but for the sake of an objective rating, I have to say that this is really not a good story.
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