A high school girl who was a chuuni dead by a truck because saving a kid who god deemed as an important figure in the future. The god then grants her a wish due to her heroic act of saving the so called important figure. And that wish is...
Disclaimer : I don't own OPM. I only own the OC and the idea. Also I don't own the cover. If you're the creator of the cover and want me to take it down, make sure to dm me. I am also planning to make the cover on my own later soo...
Warning : English isn't my first language, so expect some grammar mistakes. And it would be helpful if you help me correct it for better writing in the future :>
Great concept with lots of potential for development
Good characters so far with lots of personality
Genuinely enjoyable sense of humour that adds to the interactions and camaraderie of the main cast
Some writing is very cliche or poorly chosen for the moment with plenty of unintentionally cringey parts purely through lack of writing experience
Poor grammar with minor mistakes and sometimes annoying sentence structure. Some proofreading needed (mistakes such as 'below' being spelt as 'bellow' that don't get auto-corrected, etc.)
Overall great potential and fun story so far, if you can get past the writing style, cliches and grammar or just want a opm power fantasy from the perspective of a monster then you will definitely enjoy this novel.
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this story has a decent start.
but I think at around c17-c18, it started to get boring.
more op than saitama, less joke, no serious moments, and a romance. Not good or bad, just normal romance.
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Slow pace, a lot of gag, interesting to read and hoping not to drop this series..
Con: Short chapters, too short..
Why good series always have a short chapters..
Make it a little long, please...
Anyway, if you want to read some light reading, this is for you.. ignore childish act 'coz this is OnePunch man, always full of comedy and a little touch of emotion spice..
Good Job Author
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It is very interesting so far, there are hints of yuri so if you don't like that probably won't like it. The mc's power isn't just what it seems at first sure see has Saitama's strength, but there is more to it. Not the best character interactions but love the part where she asks for Saitama's autograph! Otherwise a great read and would highly recommend!
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The way that the fanfiction manages to add more to the comedic scenes of the canon material is something that can be considered as one of its strong suits. But I will say that there are some moments in the fanfiction where the gags and funny moments fail to deliver in the way that they were intended to.
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