Great concept with lots of potential for development
Good characters so far with lots of personality
Genuinely enjoyable sense of humour that adds to the interactions and camaraderie of the main cast
Some writing is very cliche or poorly chosen for the moment with plenty of unintentionally cringey parts purely through lack of writing experience
Poor grammar with minor mistakes and sometimes annoying sentence structure. Some proofreading needed (mistakes such as 'below' being spelt as 'bellow' that don't get auto-corrected, etc.)
Overall great potential and fun story so far, if you can get past the writing style, cliches and grammar or just want a opm power fantasy from the perspective of a monster then you will definitely enjoy this novel.
Slow pace, a lot of gag, interesting to read and hoping not to drop this series..
Con: Short chapters, too short..
Why good series always have a short chapters..
Make it a little long, please...
Anyway, if you want to read some light reading, this is for you.. ignore childish act 'coz this is OnePunch man, always full of comedy and a little touch of emotion spice..
It is very interesting so far, there are hints of yuri so if you don't like that probably won't like it. The mc's power isn't just what it seems at first sure see has Saitama's strength, but there is more to it. Not the best character interactions but love the part where she asks for Saitama's autograph! Otherwise a great read and would highly recommend!
Jean Grey’s soul is fused with one’s of a recently deceased female geek who knows her marvel lore, as she realizes that she was in the Marvel universe, this new Jean Grey takes her destiny in hand to escape her dire fate.
I will
(DB) A ‘normal’ teenager was watching Mumei, until an ad popped on his screen, now trying to get rid of the ad ask ”Want to have an adventure?”
(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
A group of rookie adventurers enter an ancient tomb in the hopes finding treasure
Within they found something priceless but it is not something they expected
Within lay an egg that held a species that existed since life began
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[R-18, Mature Element Warning!] [Multiverse!]
A young man with a questionable job dies, eaten by a shark. To his surprise, afterlife was a spinning roulette that decided his next world and powers, with an annoyed Goddess supervising the pro
We associate many things with the word “time.”
When time comes we are born.
With time we learn new words, we grow.
Over time, we fall in love and give new life.
However, when our time is up we die.
I died
Great concept with lots of potential for development
Good characters so far with lots of personality
Genuinely enjoyable sense of humour that adds to the interactions and camaraderie of the main cast
Some writing is very cliche or poorly chosen for the moment with plenty of unintentionally cringey parts purely through lack of writing experience
Poor grammar with minor mistakes and sometimes annoying sentence structure. Some proofreading needed (mistakes such as 'below' being spelt as 'bellow' that don't get auto-corrected, etc.)
Overall great potential and fun story so far, if you can get past the writing style, cliches and grammar or just want a opm power fantasy from the perspective of a monster then you will definitely enjoy this novel.
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this story has a decent start.
but I think at around c17-c18, it started to get boring.
more op than saitama, less joke, no serious moments, and a romance. Not good or bad, just normal romance.
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Slow pace, a lot of gag, interesting to read and hoping not to drop this series..
Con: Short chapters, too short..
Why good series always have a short chapters..
Make it a little long, please...
Anyway, if you want to read some light reading, this is for you.. ignore childish act 'coz this is OnePunch man, always full of comedy and a little touch of emotion spice..
Good Job Author
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It is very interesting so far, there are hints of yuri so if you don't like that probably won't like it. The mc's power isn't just what it seems at first sure see has Saitama's strength, but there is more to it. Not the best character interactions but love the part where she asks for Saitama's autograph! Otherwise a great read and would highly recommend!
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