After being framed for the use of necromancy, Nero was banished from his hometown and the great magic academy. Having nowhere else to go he was cast out into the swamps bordering his home country, Where he got lost in an Imperial city ruin and end up in a labyrinth. After a month of fighting in the labyrinth, he found an ancient site that contained magic inscriptions he had never seen before. One of which was a summoning circle. Having grown lonely due to the lack of human contact Nero decides to use it to summon a servant for him to talk to. Though in the process of doing so he accidentally summoned a hero from another world. Now what?
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Expansive worldbuilding with characters that you can root for; everybody has a reason to do what they're doing, even if it isn't obvious.
The various cultures and peoples can be a little overwhelming but are presented in an easily-swallowed manner that allows you to look deeper and puzzle out their backgrounds and motivations.
Plus it has these insanely cute pseudo sheep monsters that act as blankets several times
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Wish the main character and the heroine would do it and the heroine would say something about how
she was a man in her past life and
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@Paul_Tromba has really set the bar for Fantasy on this site, he has demonstrated excellent character growth, world building, and conflict in the chapters he has written.
Character- The characters are organic and feel like they could be real people. Especially Nero the main character, which can only be described as a well-meaning mage with PTSD.
Style- The story's flow feels natural and moves at a steady pace, the author really knows how to balance tension in the story so that it doesn't sound like it is a satire of itself.
Story- No spoilers, so all I have to say is read it for yourself it very good.
Grammar- No grammatical issues, prose that is use only helps the story and doesn't hurt it.
Overall @Paul_Tromba is creating a wonderful story that is only getting better as it develops, can't say much else without spoiling so go read it for yourself. I am highly looking forward to how the story progresses. So go read it, you won't regret it.
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