This is a story based on my characters background and journal that I played on a mud (Multi User Dungeon) over the course of several years. Dozens of people play a text based command line game at the same time. I figured I'd try to turn in into a story to see if anyone found it interesting. Please leave a comment and let me know what you think. This is my first time so not very experienced.
It is a story about how going into a multi player game expecting a typical RPG experience turns into something else because other players are involved.
3 chapters in, liking the story. It's pretty novel, since it's about a text-based online forum game. Seems to be based off of a real life experience, so I guess it won't suddenly end midway due to a lack of ideas from the author side, which is a plus.
The style is quite campy and nice. The sentences are consise but don't lose the necessary level of descriptiveness to not lose the reader's attention.
Looking forward how it unfolds.
I suggest the author numbers his chapters like "ch 3 - Light". That would feel more comfortable to navigate the story.
Not rating yet due to small number of chapters. Might update the review as I keep reading.
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This is a story about a forum RPG. It was written like it is played right now, in a forum. So, not a classically written book, but it is in the realms of a web novel. We have the beginning area, the advanced area and lots of role-playing. So, if you remember the time when you used commands to play games and feel nostalgic, give this story a read. You won't regret it.
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