OK I'll start with what I liked. I love the characters they're deep and still have a lot of room for development. There's still a lot of mystery surrounding the supporting cast which is well incorporated into the story. This is because it's written in first person so this is not a story for people that like to be the all-knowing reader. I also don't dislike the power system but I can't say much about it because not much has been revealed. What I didn't like is the pacing, at least up till now, allthough things do seem to be heating up it was a really rough start. The others have already said it but the beginning is slow. And people that came for an action packed novel are gonna be disappointed, the story focuses almost entirely on the characters. This could however change in the future. 

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Alright, so the beginning is a little slow, but there's a good character build up and I actually see personalities get revealed (not just titties like other stories). I came for the tags, but I stayed for the writing. If you like dialogue for character interaction, stick around.

The art is pretty good too for a starter.

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I made an account specifically to give a review on this story after following it for a while. The slice of life element makes for well rounded characters and makes the action scenes that much better. If you've read this story let's talk about it :)

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