The Oscillation (Clean; 1st Draft)
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4.6 (43 ratings)
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Synopsis
It was an average day in Miami—then fractures in the sky appeared. A pulse from those cracks altered the population; some people's biology changed while others received magical and supernatural powers. After the chaos, the political drama ensued, followed by the discovery of portals that brought deadly creatures. They called this event "The Oscillation" and it changed Rachel's life forever.
Note: I've received some feedback that people don't like the foul language. This also included my mother, she wanted me to make a cleaner version for her. So, I thought I might as well release it alongside the more explicit version. I went back and rewrote the parts that have profanity in them. ^_^7
Cover Commissioned From Likesac ^_^7
Genre
ActionAdventureDramaLitRPGMartial ArtsPsychologicalSlice of LifeSupernaturalA Tail’s Misfortune (1st Draft) (Shared Universe)
The Oscillation (1st Draft) (Adapted From)
Undying Empire (1st Draft) (Shared Universe)
- Please Proceed To The Final DraftApr 10, 2023
- B5 — 40. The Curious TimewalkerApr 10, 2023
- B5 — 39. A Traitor RevealedApr 3, 2023
- B5 — 38. A Lady of HadesMar 27, 2023
- B5 — 37. The Wisdom of SolomonMar 20, 2023
- B5 — 36. Begin The HuntMar 13, 2023
- B5 — 35. China, Friend or Foe?Mar 6, 2023
- B5 — 34. The Empires Of ChinaFeb 28, 2023
- B5 — 33. The Empress; Power IncarnateFeb 20, 2023
- B5 — 32. Hostage Negotiator?Feb 13, 2023
- B5 — 31. Melishna, The Flower Of LightFeb 6, 2023
- Big Changes: I Don’t Want To Write This Message…Jan 30, 2023
- B5 — 30. Neil’sceraJan 30, 2023
- B5 — 29. Eldritch AdaptationJan 23, 2023
- B5 — 28. Inside the WebJan 16, 2023
Table of Contents
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Hiatus - Updated Apr 10, 2023
Last updated 1 year ago
User Stats
- 251 reading
- 40 plan to read
- 6 completed
- 9 paused
- 28 dropped
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