Edward was reincarnated into the world of Harry Potter, an act which excites him giving the fact that this was one of his favorite books. So, he embarks on the path of wizardry in the hope of discovering the way it works, the laws or theories that govern it; he wanted to find its essence.
He tries to find the answer to questions like What is the soul. Why can wizards use magic, while muggles cannot? Do bloodlines truly exist? And if so, what use is it to wizards? Could it be the reason that some wizards are born with exceptional talents like Parselmouth or Metamorphmagus?
When Edward finally uncovers the answers to these questions he pondered on, he suddenly thought to himself: "Since the world of Harry Potter is real, what about all the other anime, movies, games, and books that I read from my past life? And if they are indeed real, how I can I get there?"
This story is an Infinite Stream novel where the mc travels through different anime and movie worlds acquiring various magical abilities and knowledge to become a supreme wizard that stands on the top of countless dimensions and universes.
Warnings: The MC will spend a great deal of time in the Harry Potter World before going to other worlds.
I have not decided whether the [Curse Child] is canon or not. I do not care what JK Rowling said.
This is a pseudo-science explanation of magic, so take it with a grain of salt.
I am an amateur writer with not-so-good grammar, so any constructive criticism is appreciated.
This is a wish-fulfillment and Gary Stu-type novel, so read at your own risk. If this is not your type of story, please move along and do not complain.
Although this fanfic will be a Harem, the mc will not have a thousand women. Most likely, I will write so that he has a certain relationship with some female characters, then he will leave her in her own universe. Only a few will follow him in his journey. Also, a few men will be in his group. THIS IS NOT A YAOI.
If you enjoy my writing, please go read my other novel. [Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor] on Webnovel Although the story is slow in the beginning, it is worth the wait for the later plots.
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Disclaimer: All the characters--except the one created by me--belong to JK Rowling.
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- 642, Avengers’ Training: Iron ManJan 8, 2025
- 641. Avengers’ Training: HulkJan 8, 2025
- 640. Avengers’ Training: Captain AmericaDec 5, 2024
- 639. Avengers; Training: Black Widow IIINov 16, 2024
- 638. Avengers’ Training: Black Widow IINov 3, 2024
- 637. Avengers’ Training: Black WidowOct 24, 2024
- 636. Avengers’ Training: HawkeyeOct 19, 2024
- 635. Soul Divinity & Void RuneOct 17, 2024
- 634. Aftermath & The Scarlet CloneOct 13, 2024
- 633. Cruel RealityOct 12, 2024
- 632. StabilizerSep 6, 2024
- 631. A Genius’ PrideSep 6, 2024
- 630. ReactionAug 22, 2024
- 629. The TruthAug 22, 2024
- 628. Battle of New York (II)Aug 17, 2024
- 2866 reading
- 381 plan to read
- 65 completed
- 127 paused
- 223 dropped
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I quit this piece because I realized that nothing would change, and I got tired of feeling bored.
Here are the problems with the work that I noticed and about which I was not too lazy to write.
1 The main problem of the work is that the author does not have patience, most of the other problems are related to this.
It would be possible to create a work in which you really sympathize with the characters. And in this case: bam, time skip and the character suddenly has 5 wives (or how many there are, it's even hard to remember). With 2 of them there was no described interaction before the time skip. I even had to google 1 of them by name, because I forgot about the existence of this character.
2, the author paid a huge amount of attention to what he does not succeed.
Scientific experiments are boring in and of themselves, and one must be crazy to enjoy every processing, recording, and comparison of samples and analyses.
But you need to be an inept author to turn all this into a "magic" zilch that has no logical justification, where the whole experiment fits in 1 paragraph.
Magic, as one person said, is a science beyond our comprehension. So this is also science. In most cases, this is simply the direct use and management of energy without the help of external tools.
Given that a person also consists of energy, like any matter that has a form, it is obvious that he is potentially capable of this. It's just that the probability of mastering is negligible.
I saw more than 10 works where magical experiments were described and not only. And this job is the worst of the worst.
3 maintaining the illusion that the author knows what he is talking about.
Yes, this is one of the main points of successful work, and the author flew on it completely.
I am not at all against changing the laws of reality in fictional worlds. But you need to be able to do it. Especially when you are not going to do it, but just talking nonsense. For example: "the speed of sound is a constant in reality" (which is denied with evidence on the first page of Google search), and this is not to mention the fact that I do not completely agree with the speed of light as a constant.
4 and Only after the hasty author, empty characters, poor specialization, and lack of diligence does the author make sense to talk about other mistakes.
Such as:
Crooked writing of fanfiction (what idiot came up with the idea that everyone should know who is who, just by knowing his name?) ;
Interesting narration (my review is more interesting to read than the dry text of this work. Even if it is no less monotonous than the work, it at least has something like humor in it. The only scene in the film that remotely resembles interest is the battle scene with Dumbledore)
Space and terraformation (What are you talking about? We have long gone beyond the limits of our solar system, and do not huddle on one single planet and its satellite)
Other civilizations (First contact? what first contact? we have been in touch for a long time.) ;
Plot stumps (what did the author do with Voldemort?) ;
Great empire of knowledge. (A great empire? Bullsh*t! Any smart person will understand that scientists are not all that is needed to develop an empire. Krypton from the DS universe is a good example).
Main Character OP (This may be interesting, but here again, poor execution. And Death and Truth in the far background remain a distant background.)
5 and finally: The Protagonist constantly talks about seeking knowledge and power for the sake of adventure, exploring new worlds, protecting loved ones and what he has achieved. But the facts prove only one thing: he seeks knowledge and power, only for more power and knowledge.
Adventures? It is impossible to participate in adventures while remaining an observer.
Exploring new worlds? Magical and scientific knowledge and sources of power are not all there is in the world.
Protecting loved ones and what he has achieved... The whole list of all this fits in... a time skip. Why? Because it is a hindrance and it is not interesting to him.
In short, the only good thing about this piece is: That I got a reason to practice my review writing skill again.
The only reason why 2 and not 1 is that the author is still writing and has a chance to get better (the idea was good, just the execution is lousy).
PS And also in the fact that it exists, as an example of how not to write, but also how to write so that you don't feel sick from what you read.
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This novel is a clear and solid example of a fanfiction that should forever remained buried.
Crass story of a powertrip, with 0 sense nor agency, with complete and utter disrespect to the original story, characters and ambiance.
It's bland, boring and not particularly well writen either.
The last straw was how dirty author did James Potter. That whole clusterf**k of a situation was at best cringy, at worst mere trash.
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The story has been nothing but amazing. The MC is really likable too.
Only problem I can think of is grammar mistakes that could be fixed with a simple re-read.
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Starting was good until he rule his world.
After that MC just travel to another world and experiment / learn new powers / magic. Very boring nothing happening.
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The story is amazing and well thought-out, with likeable characters and some growth.
For now I will refrain from docking 2 stars because of the really, really bad grammar since I’m loving this novel.
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Love the story. The plot is creative and I love some of the plot changes (to the original timeline). It would be a 5-star rating from me but there's just one flaw I couldn't get past. The grammar in some chapters is just atrocious. Other than that, very few complaints. Can't wait for more.
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The first 51 chapters are genuinely interesting and other than grammatical issues, it has potential. During the 2nd year is when things really start to pick up pace though and author decides they don't have the patience to go through all the stuff that makes a story a story and decides to hit you with a fat time skip. Something that becomes increasingly common in order to just skip to the point author wants.
Relationships magically appear, and an empire at his fingertips to do as he pleases, and to be fair, the introduction of the Arcane Empire and how it functions is interesting too, enough to potentially rekindle interest. However that wasn't capitalized on, and we the reader have no investment in it, just like we have no investment in his relationships, or anything really as the story goes on.
MC leaves his empire and HP verse to explore the multiverse for more knowledge to build up his Empire, just that we were only just introduced to this empire, and his wives and everything else before he just up and leaves. Like hey man, I wanna know more about this cool sh*t that suddenly appeared..
It eventually becomes a stale repeat of what has happened prior but it feels shallow and unsatisfying. MC literally goes up to multiple women he has never met, or has merely had one conversation with with and is like, 'Hey, wanna be my wife?' I sh*t you not, that's not even summarized, it's literally what he said. And to nobodys surprise, the women say no ?. Hell, one of them is married and when he popped that question her husband was right there, before MC proceeded to beat him in an arm wrestling match to show dominance. Like what the hell is even going on anymore?
If the author was willing to put the time into a rewrite, clean up the grammar and give some more depth to the the characters, the plot, world building that had hardly any depth or nuance to them to begin with, itd be amazing. Author doesn't lack the creativity, the building blocks are all there, it has potential to be a really interesting multiverse fic. The execution is just not there unfortunately.
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OO, me here from webnovel, happy this is here too, yay! Really love this!
Although that James Potter situation felt messed up, :feelsbadman:, full on NTRed kinda feeling.
Unlike James, Lily's character has gotten loose. I imagine how she would feel if James did the same thing to her first. I hope the author does something about him or this will leave a bad taste.
I like romance fics. Harem so so. Hate NTRs.
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Great story indeed, though MC's leveling up rate is fast in my opinion, the story flow is still awesome, though I would recommend the author to make more side stories inside the empire which really boosts the audience like!
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