Be prepared for large chunks of the story to be cut out due to the authors efforts to enforce monetization. Also expect some writing inconsistencies and the impression of a general lack of post editing after writing. Story wise, it started out interesting, things were already taking turns I hadn't expected to happen so soon. Then the story got amputated. I'm on the fence if I should continue reading or not and just throw in the towel on this one.

Edit: Decided to drop both this story and this author. Not worth my time.

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TheCritiuqeTimes

Status: c7

Jan 7, 2022

Post-rewrite review

The rewrite is A LOT better than before. No more typical moronic hesitant isekai MC and hello trademark Jamminrabbit-type MC. Even if the "I am Succubus" type story is not something you would consider serious, I'd say that this type of WN is THE identity of Jamminrabbit. Throwing it away makes them just another boring author.

Definitely higher score than pre-rewrite.

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Queen

Status: chapter 20 – a succubus’ first time (18+)

Nov 16, 2021

First it has a succubus as a main character, I mean come on, every one loves succubus demon's, especially me. I love them sooooo much. Then there's Futanari, even though those chapters haven't come out yet, it still makes me excited. Let's see what else... Oh! Then there's loyal dragon kin, I really really like her, then there's someone we can all agree to that we hate, a mischievous cunning stupid demi Goddess who will do what ever she can to get out of a tough situation. The plot is fairly simple, defeating a demon lord, so all we have to do is join the author in his journey through this wonderful, lustful, Futanari ful, funny journey. I highly recommend this, so what are you waiting for reading this review, get to reading the actual novel you degenerates...

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atavatain

Status: c8

Jan 6, 2023

I usually give a story 20 or so chapters to get up to speed unless it does something egregious. This story is awkward but started to pick up in chapter 7. Unfortunately that's where you get an advertisement for "volume one" instead of chapter 8. The next 30 odd chapters require a kindle and giving Amazon money. Then it's back here.

So at the time of writin, you click next from chapter 7, then you get an advertisement for the Amazon listing and the author's other stories, then the next chapter is 41. Not sure if this repeats later because once was enough for me.

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Suyaris

Status: c10

May 10, 2023

Feels like a lot of scenes are missing or you just couldn’t bother to write it in a slower pace and descriptive details. Lots of times you just jump from one scene to the other without telling what happened between them. It reads so straightforward that you don’t really care about the emotions or personality of the characters. A shame since this could’ve been good if you wrote it with more descriptions of what’s happening.

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kelicant

Status: c7

Apr 29, 2023

Not really a gender bender story, so if you're looking for that you won't find it. The MC was summoned to another world as a succubus, but in both personality and actions they were one anyways back on earth. So there is no change going on, just her enjoying s*x while fumbling through encounters. The characters so far have been rather shallow and one dimensional, with things like her slaver begging her for help. It didn't interest me nearly enough to continue when it gets locked behind a paywall.

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Azmerai

Status: chapter 220 – knight of gold

Oct 17, 2023

This story is great, its easily one of the best i've read, and its still being written.i admit the fact that the first biggest chunk of the story is locked behind a pay wall was a big deal breaker for me, but after some umming and ahh about it all, and with nothing left to read, I bought into their patreon, not the novel itself and I'm happy to say that I'm really glad I did.

The author is a wonderful person and is prompt when im asking questions about their story. First, I think the characters are well written, they are believable and have consistent reactions to the events in the story. The Lewd elements of the story enhance it, rather then detract from it, which I found really well balanced. Events in the story are written well enough that I was genuinely feeling for these characters as they went through their hardships and that doesnt happen very often. I care for these fictitious people and I want them to succeed which sounds dumb lol, there have been multiple times that ive wanted to contact the author to get inside information because I hate waiting for the next chapter.

In my opinion, its well worth the money, even if you just sub for a month to get the whole story. What author wouldnt want to be paid for their effort? Tbh im surprised almost all the story is still up on this site, it gets so much better later on in the novel and I binged the whole thing in a few days.

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Triver

Status: chapter 125 – counterattack!

Jan 2, 2023

Honestly the story and world building is way better tha the premise let's through.

The characters are interesting and dynamic, and while the s*X scenes sometimes get cut out (do not worry when they happen it's described in a deeply detailed manner) and sometimes there's a lot of horny the more wholesome and thoughtful nature of the characters gets displayed. Would definitely recommend, also here and there there are some very funny reference hidden.

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Kaetii

Status: chapter 1 – the demon lord hijacked...

Mar 14, 2024

The story branches and includes much s*x. Not quite my cup of tea but the overlying story has kept my attention and entertained me. Good story that is ongoing and you can usually fast forward the blatant aspects to follow along.

I recommend "Ellori, the Ero Witch of Parthun" for a fun time.

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