The Council of God's granted me one wish, so I told them...
"Reincarnate me as a Harem Protagonist in an H game!"
“I...you...wha...uh..e-e-e-eeehhh????”
(This story is purely for fun. So I have no idea whats going to happen from here on out. But, hopefully you enjoy!)
P.S. This is not my cover, all credit goes to the artist.
Not as advertised. It basically is the opposite of any 'traditional' isekai into a harem game. While this could be really enjoyable, it just isn't.
The MC has zero likeable qualities. He's creepy af, socially inept, even his monologue is boring and myopic. The heroines are awful. I don't even mean that they are bad people (which most are) but they are just written to be subversions. They don't feel real, neither like they'd exist on Earth nor in-universe.
I wanted to like this, I wanted it to grow on me, it did not.
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Uhmm, I don't know what to say.
First of all, the character development is kinda hard to be seen here for little things has changed in the mc's life even after being isekaid or smth.
Second, I really don't understand the kind of relationship the MC has with Saya, I mean, He express heavy disgust with her attitude (like wanting to vomit or puke when he sees her,) and at the same time, loved her dearly. Like, if this is supposed to be a great "MC changes a game dev or smth" and a "harem, " he is supposed to accept whatever differences or weakness or ugliness the character has, and change it (like Saya's smokin habit and her self-destructive tendencies.)
Third, if this is a harem, why the others are like "subplot" or almost pointing to non-existence as most of the time, every pov focuses on saya only. There are almost no interaction to other girls that are part of the harem, Jennifer is the most notable example. She is just like an npc which will stop the MC from going to school. No actual feelings. Because that is what I see. Their screentime and in-depth emotion or relation is non-existent. Only focusing on mc's personal anger or disgust.
I hate to compare a series to another series, but try reading "Red Princess" which is also a yandere story. The great difference is noticeable for it explains every detail the character has, their emotion, in-depth logic thinking and especially, how the mc's relationship with its partners develop.
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TLDR at the bottom
This is a great novel with characters that actually feel real and with a different type of MC that while incredibly pathetic, still feels refreshing in a sea full of MCs with Pride or Lust as their main "weaknesses". If this was a typical yandere harem romcom Id give it 4 stars, but its not supposed to be.
The thing is.... the novel is advertised as having a "Dark Souls" difficulty so much so that the author also reminds the commenters, but I've not seen anything even remotely difficult that the MC had to go through, if you exclude his own stupidity and the typical situations with yanderes. Hell I'd even say that compared to other yandere novels, this is tame.
The MC was given a status sort of like "Scum of the Earth" and that he is hated by almost everybody, but nothing actually hinders him, and in fact it is the opposite and everybody actually helps him. The situations he goes through looks terrible, but nothing bad actually happens to him.
Take him going to a place that I can only describe as a cross between a ghetto and a landfill, and going there by fancy car. You would think that with a difficulty like "Dark Souls" he would at least get harassed by panhandlers or curious people but nope, he went in and out no problems.
Then there's the times he acts like a creep to strangers and hugs them. What do you think their reactions were? That's right, just like in Dark Souls they were just weirded out with some even liking it.
Oh f**k the MC keeps missing school, doesnt pay attention in class, and never submitted homework, all that happening at the start of the schoolyear, he's gotta be f**ked right? Especially since its Dark Soulsy he's probably even expelled and marked on record... NOPE! All the teachers actually sympathized with him and told him to take his time.
Remember when he was Scum of the Earth? Well I did, it only lasted a chapter, then everyone did a 180 and now everyone is concerned with him, even the strangers who just glimpsed at him at the train. A person he meets the first time might dislike him but on their 2nd meeting? It changes to 'f**k yeah lets hangout also I think I like you already'. And no, he is in no way charismatic or handsome enough to pull that off.
The MC himself is also weird, not in personality but more in personality shifts or inner thoughts/dialogue, like here he is moping and actually crying but after a few mins, shifts to admiring someone's ass or someones cuteness or even flirting, then back to crying, like wtf? Also the crying.. OMFG the crying. In 28 chapters the MC has cried more than most actors/actresses would cry in an entire Soap Opera run. He probably has cried every other chapter. I get that the MC has anxiety, but anxiety is more than just crying at everything everytime.
All in all, I gave it 2 stars since it was supposed to be different, difficult and dangerous but it is actually just a tame yander harem novel. I could've given more examples on how the MC is actually helped instead of hindered, but I think you get the idea.
TLDR: If I compare this novel to actual Dark Souls/Elden Ring, It'd be like a person playing one handed, running a lvl1 Deprived/Wretch empty hand only no deaths and bonfires run, except he has unlimited health. Also the PC randomly does the Curl Up/Balled Up gesture every few minutes.
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⚠️ It's not your typical yandere harem story! This story has drama, tragedy and some cuckold-ntr elements!
I came for the tags thinking that it's gonna be vannila and whatnot but it wasn't.
Some may argue that there's not ntr-cuckold but one of the heroines is a whore, basically selling her body to live. I don't if MC will get serious with her but I can't endure all the way to see it, otherwise my menthal health will be in danger.
Mc's personality is like sh*t. At first he seems like a normal person and acts like one but at later chapters he transforms into a beta Japanese MC and a depressive one. His actions are arratic and chaotic.
I aggre this would be a great story but it's hard to read a story involves depressive characters, ntr themes.
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It’s pretty intense. No harem lovey dovey stuff but very interesting description of someone suffering from an isekai. Trauma and stuff. I’ll be checking for updates, so keep writing author.
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Excellent book. Subverts expectations.
Good potential harem.
Enjoying the reality checks. Especially the one in the latest chapter.
Looking forward to more.
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The story is steadily getting more interesting. I'm excited for the potential of this novel.
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A well-written yandere story starting with a thoroughly incompetent MC. As the story goes on, the MC becomes less of a wimp and gets infected with his world's brand of insanity.
Super interesting plot. Great grammar. Great spelling. Very good story.
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Don't listen to any of the 1 star reviews here. This sh*t is fantastic. The violence, the complete insanity of this story made me drop a five star review just 6 chapters in. I don't know if it will still be as good later on, but I don't care. I am giving it 5 stars anyways.
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Honestly really good one of the few novels that has an actual yandere only one or two flaws while most works have dozens
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