After dying in a hospital, our Mc wants to enjoy his new life to the fullest. What can you do with the Longinous Annihilation maker, a great imagination, and a system that lets you summon characters you knew in you past life?.
I do not own the cover.
English is not my main lenguage.
It's not a bad story,
However the timeline of this story, And references a little bit vague.
To show a issue of the story, The entire event of the story in the Canon series is a little messed up messed up to say the least in the beginning.
And I believe the messed up storyline in the beginning is mit's messing up the rest of the story continuing on.
Recommendations please fix the beginning timeline for the future chapter to make sense.
Thanks
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this is DXD fanfic where MC is not stealing harem of Issei...
also there are grama, pronunciacion and most likely other types of mistakes, especially at the beginning.
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The story and characters are good, but the grammar needs some rework.
Good job.
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It's decent. Gotta be patient with this one tho. The grammar mistakes only got better after 40 chapters or so.
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