By RangerFrank
What happens when humanity’s greatest weapon gets a second chance at life? Commander Kronos wasn’t even considered to be a human but rather a weapon to be used for the greater good of his species. He was grown in a tube to be the perfe
Slow start, but fairly well written. Nothing has happened much yet, but the first ten chapters are a fun read.
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Good, I like it, 4 stars. I liked the fact of the “internal character manipulation”
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Good story. I like the fact that it's a bit slow and the pacing of information is good. I appreciate the fact that the MC is not OP and you can see he, s dealing with emotions and stuff. That sensitive part of him makes him likable. Keep up the good work! O (*>ω<*) o
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I really love how the story started out, but I feel like its starting to drift away from what I liked, but that's ok. I am curious to see where it's headed.
I won't give spoilers about the story, so my review will be about the writing elements. I feel like the writing started out solid, but somewhere around chapter 30 or so the style changed to the dreadful single sentence paragraph style used by many younger writers. Full of unqualified quotes and useless spaces. I have seen people state that this is a style that's meant to appeal to readers on a cell phone, but it makes reading annoying for people who aren't looking for a story delivered in text messages.
Despite that, I do enjoy reading the story and look forward to what will happen to Mark and the boys going forward.
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This is a good second chance story about a pro VR player returning to the past after hitting a dead end, similar to Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, Rebirth of the Thief that Roamed the Lands, etc.
So far the story hasn't gotten into raids, bosses, or things along those lines, but it seems promising. There are also hints of something bigger happening in the background, aside from the MC's adventures.
It looks like it's going to be a slow build until the almighty Sword Emperor, but the journey looks like it's going to be a fun one.
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