I’ve been transported to a game, now what?
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Synopsis
Bell is playing a VRMMORPG called "The World" with his friends, they created a party and became one of the top players and then one day they got beaten by some unknown party that suddenly attacked them. His frustrated friends said that they call it a day for now, but before he logged out he talks about something his friends might think weird and childish. One of his friend still haven't logged off and heard what he said. After explaining things to his friend they logged out of the game and tired Bell gone straight to his bed. After that mysterious things happen.
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ActionAdventureComedyFantasyIsekaiLitRPGTragedy- Chapter 1 – Starting with a fallSep 29, 2021
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The opening scene felt nice, not gonna lie. However, the story felt sloppy immediately after. Initially, I wondered if this was going to create the atmosphere, so I stayed. But the grammar was so bad, I had to opt out. Hopefully, the author will edit and fix the mistakes. Most of them were silly mistakes in the beginning. Reading onwards felt like I was reading the 1st or 2nd draft of a story. Various parts of the first half of the story either was boring and unexplained, or confusing because of the grammar (I'm not entirely certain if those parts were for adding suspense, but it was badly done). I did not stay for the 2nd half of the story. Have to drop it for the time being, sorry.
Look, so long as the author edits this story into a better version, I'm willing to re-read and change my review. No problem.
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