It's a decent fanfic that seems to have a lot of effort put into it so far, the chapters are long and fast-paced and when the novel is actually making progress in the plot it's really good. Although, the story seems kinda boring? It's fast-paced but makes little sense most of the time, side characters enter the story with sloppiness. Now, the whole story revolves around women and the story seems more like a sh*tty romance than fanfic.

If the author would just write some more story and actual plot that makes sense instead of adding so many characters that you just don't care about into the story, randomly. (Spoilers ahead) The MC literally ascended to godhood and f**king nothing happened after that like, ok? That was badass and now what? F**king nothing. (Spoiler end) The MC should be more arrogant, it's like he doesn't even have a personality anymore, it's just bland.

ALTHOUGH, it is worth reading if you like marvel harem stuff and power development (even if it (power) doesn't seem to matter anyway).

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Miwa

Status: c13

Aug 3, 2021

Dropped at 13 because of forced comedy... killed the whole vibe that the story had going... MC becomes more and more of a push over.. it's more than just whipped... it's like every girl in the story has a leash on him... his reactions to them could make me commit a war crime.. choked through all of chapter 13 hoping it would change back but now I can't get the taste of let down out of my mouth... feels bad.. besides gwen I was enjoying this fanfic...

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DJDAN

Status: c52

Sep 18, 2020

Read up to chapter 52, and it's only because there's nothing else to read. The story connects very well with each other, at least, I feel like it. I'm not a lore nut and only know the basic stuff, and that's only from the MCU, but everything checks out in my mind.

NOTE: Each chapter is very long, so this isn't something to break out for a light read.

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