So yea, this story is written like a script, the lines from each character is preceded by their name, eg. [Tohru: "Now Miss Kobayashi's introduced me to her parents, I've practically claimed her heart!"] It goes as far as to constantly mention the 'camera's' POV and what it's doing (zooming in, turning to this turning to that etc.)

Personally, I don't like this kind of writing, because it feels like everything keeps stopping to specify a perspective which is most often not necessary in the case of the 'camera' or better when written such that each character's name doesn't need to proceed their words for you to know who's talking. It breaks the flow of the story for me, so I'm dropping rather early for this reason.

That said, I'm well aware that there are people who either don't mind or prefer it this way, so if that's you, then you might like this story.

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