By AhraManyu
Rakna was not normal. No, unmistakably not. Whether it was his appearance, his personality, his abilities, his identity, nothing about him had ever been banal. Was it his choice? No. He was merely but a tormented soul doing its utmost to live the
A captivating story with a solid and easy-to-follow storytelling, featuring a vivid and effective descriptions. It has a good balance of dialogues, narration, and world-building for such a fast-paced story with short chapters. The story doesn't deviate from its promise, it's exactly what's written in the summary and remains like that to the very end. Bonus point for the consistency.
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A very well written and enjoyable story.
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The story is original and interesting. Espetially as we learn more and more about the MCs past.
Imo one of the best adventure type stories on this site. 5/5
The non villain characters are likeable and fleshed out. 4/5
I also really like the worldbuilding and Magic system. 5/5
The combat however is not what I would have prefered 1/5 :
It began with: The enemies having plot armour. That plot armour grows stronger in the newer chapters. (Naruto Style)
Escalated into: the heroes are only alive because the villains spare them. That too escalates as time goes on.
And even a couple of deus Ex machina moments (2).
I will still rate this a 4/5, because my opinion on the battles is very subjective. If you like the premise, give it a try, the story will likely exceed your expectations.
For those that share my sensibilities however this is more a 3/5.
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