A captivating story with a solid and easy-to-follow storytelling, featuring a vivid and effective descriptions. It has a good balance of dialogues, narration, and world-building for such a fast-paced story with short chapters. The story doesn't deviate from its promise, it's exactly what's written in the summary and remains like that to the very end. Bonus point for the consistency.

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Haefey

Status: c~236

Oct 22, 2022

The story is original and interesting. Espetially as we learn more and more about the MCs past.

Imo one of the best adventure type stories on this site. 5/5

The non villain characters are likeable and fleshed out. 4/5

I also really like the worldbuilding and Magic system. 5/5

The combat however is not what I would have prefered 1/5 :

Spoiler

It began with: The enemies having plot armour. That plot armour grows stronger in the newer chapters. (Naruto Style)

Escalated into: the heroes are only alive because the villains spare them. That too escalates as time goes on.

And even a couple of deus Ex machina moments (2).

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I will still rate this a 4/5, because my opinion on the battles is very subjective. If you like the premise, give it a try, the story will likely exceed your expectations.

For those that share my sensibilities however this is more a 3/5.

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Sukkubix

Status: chapter 295

Oct 10, 2024

Fairly good, pretty sad, seems like its on (indefinite?) hiatus; but has ~300 chapters and the content that is there is definitely worth reading.

It ends @295 between major scenes/conflicts, during the preparation for the final battle. Based on the pacing, guessing something between 30-40 chapters from completion.

Chapter 294 has a picture of the protag.

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