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Magical Girl Revolution (Draft)
Magical Girl Revolution (Draft)
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Characters
Amy Rochelle

[The Lovable Bruiser] - [Unique Magic: Earth Manipulation | Operator Type] - [Weapon: Fingerless Gloves]

A 'Normal' high school student, she's known for being intelligent, funny and a Magical girl fanatic but is overshadowed by her 'Cripling social anxiety' so not many people actually know what she's thinking.

She's not your average magical girl although she's really is trying to be.

Gender: Female

Age: 14

Birthday: November 21

Eye color: Emerald Green.

Katrina Isolde [Aquamarine / Aqua]

[The Frozen Aquamarine] - [Unique Magic: Water Manipulation | Operator Type] - [Weapon: Magic Sprinkler]

A Soon to be retired [Second generation Magical Girl], she's tasked with one last assignment before she can leave for good "You must train a capable [Third Generation Magical Girl]" and so now she's in search of suitable candidates.

Gender: Female.

Age: 19.

Birthday: July 21.

Eye color: Ambar.

Amy's preferred way to call her: Aqua.

Maria Fortune

[Miss Fortune] - [Unique Magic: Barrier Casting | Caster Type] - [Weapon: Red hand fan]

She is Amy's best friend, Her outgoing and cheerful personality may look adverse to Amy but they like the same stuff and rely on each other for emotional support.

She's your average sport-practicing gal with a fascination with magical girls!!!

Gender: Female.

Age: 14.

Birthday: June 30.

Eye color: Brown.

Amy's preferred way to call her: Mary. 

Hui Kaku

[The Mad scientist] - [Unique Magic: Temporary Duplication | Caster Type] - [Weapon: Yo-yo]

A green-haired girl with oversized round glasses, she is always wearing an unbuttoned lab coat or clothes that resemble it, she's always seen near devil incidents and is studying something behind the scenes.

Gender: Female.

Age: 15.

Birthday: February 28.

Eye color: Yellow.

Amy's preferred way to call her: Doc.

Vera Brand

[The Red-haired Witch] - [Unique Magic: Fire Casting | Caster Type] - [Weapon: Straw Broom]

Vera is a new magical girl that's been around for a few weeks longer than Amy, she has an impulsive and explosive attitude, lashing out at most things, she develops a competitive relationship with Amy since they work together in most situations.

Gender: Female.

Age: 14.

Birthday: July 10.

Eye color: Crimson.

Amy's preferred way to call her: Vera.

Akari Isolde

[The Curious Enchantress] - [Unique Magic: Telekinesis | Operator Type] - [Weapong: Magician's Wand]

Amy's school class representative seems cold at first glance but she is just shy to show her emotion since she thinks it wouldn't be 'good for a class representative', she lacks restraint in her mouth and asks about things that she shouldn't, so she only does that around Amy.


Gender: Female.

Age: 14.

Birthdate: March 31.

Eye color: Ambar.

Amy's preferred way to call her: Class rep.


David Siegfried

[The Street Magician] - [Unique Magic: Storage | Caster Type] - [Weapon: Trick Deck of Cards]

He's part of a group of magic users that exclusively recruits boys, after an encounter with Amy ending in his defeat, he gets expelled from said group, he decides to follow Amy on her adventure only because card reading told him to.

Gender: Male.

Age: 15.

Birthday: June 13.

Eye color: Light purple.

Amy's preferred way to him: Dave / Magician.

Bellatrix Earl

[The Virtuous Knight] - [Unique Magic: Calesvol Cut | Caster Type] - [Weapon: Calesvol]

She is a blond-haired girl that has taken the role of knight in shining armor, she is dumb and clueless about everything that doesn't involve a sword including her own feelings, she says they are not necessary since she is yet to face her 'fated battle' against darkness [Delusional].

Gender: Female.

Age: 15.

Birthday: July 1.

Eye color: Blue.

Amy's preferred way of calling her: Belle / Dumb knight.

Douglass Lark

[The Black Sparrow] - [Unique Magic: Complete Local Manipulation | Operator Type] - [Weapon: Tonfas]

He's the self-appointed president of the school disciplinary committee, he's known for 2 things, liking the school rules and set of guidances too much and beating up anyone who doesn't know their 'role' with his 2 tonfas.

Gender: Male.

Age: 16.

Birthday: May 23.

Eye color: Grey

Amy's preferred way to call him: Lark.

Guardian Angels
Sauriel

[The Guardian angel of Guidance] - [Rank: Seraphim]

It's an angel originally assigned to be young Aquamarine guidance, now it's tasked with finding a new master to guide through the world of magical girls, although time has sure taken its toll on its intelligence showed by its lack of self-awareness or awareness of any kind.

Age: Unknown.

Birthdate: Imposible to determine.

Villains
Magda Sienna

[The Walking Disaster] - [Unique Magic: Explosion Manipulation | Operator Type] - [Weapon: Dynamite Bag].

A twin-tailed magical girl that has the power to control explosions, she can pause them and interact with them in weird ways.

She has orange hair with strokes of blonde arranged in twin tails, her aggressive personality goes well with her dynamite-creating weapon.

Gender: Female.

Age: 14.

Birthday: August 6.

Eye color: Light green.

Ophelia Charlotte

[The Awarded Colonel] - [Unique Magic - Portal Creation| Caster Type] - [Weapon: Uzi]

A military-themed magical girl that can cast portals and use them as she pleases, generally storing a lot of aether-infused weapons.

She has silver hair that is mostly hidden by her army hat with an octagram symbol, she doesn't seem to be interested in fighting and only likes money.

Gender: Female.

Age: 16.

Birthday: June 6.

Eye color: Light blue.

Concepts
Sagas

I Have absolutely no idea of how to write, but I have the impression that most stories are divided, so I have done the same, I have the habit to call them 'Arcs' but they resemble more sagas in my opinion, as for novels I don't know if volumes are considered the same but that's my warning.

From Chapter 1 - 29 | [Comicket Saga] | (Introduction)

It emphasizes the setting of the world as well as explaining the life and world that Amy's is in as she becomes a Magical girl, getting to know other figures and more importantly, getting into many fights unprovoked from both sides.

Generations

  • [First Generation Magical Girls]

It refers to the first wave of magical girls that started appearing 15 years ago, their characteristics are homogeneous, so their outfits, weapons, and magic are similar to each other, the First magical girl still alive, but her whereabouts are unknown.

Devils started appearing with magical girls, so they are basically sworn enemies, a fact that has stayed true to this day.

  • [Second Generation Magical Girls]

It refers to the second wave of magical girls, they started appearing 7 years ago, their characteristics diversified a lot now encompassing anything 'magical', so their outfits started resembling street magicians, illusionists, witches, and the like.

Evil organizations and Villains made out of magical girls started appearing during this period, they had different objectives but they clashed with classical magic girls a lot.

  • [Third Generation Magical Girls]

It refers to the third wave of magical girls, it is the current generation of magical girls, their characteristics diversified even further, now anything could be a magical girl, a fighter with gloves, a scientist with a lab coat, or a girl in a military outfit, anything goes in this chaotic era.

The devil and antagonist are higher than ever, the only shining light is that the quality of the magical girl rose up from the previous generation, but they're still too inexperienced in contrast with older generations.


 

Magical Girl Contract

Magical Girl Contract

The following document details the terms and conditions of the contract between 2* parties, in this case, the [Angel Name] and the [Race]  [Name if Any], Signing this contract puts you under the contractual obligation of the following Terms and conditions, any deviation from the specified terms will be met with repercussion extending from light punishment to Heavy-duty work in the world of Gaia, these punishments are detailed in each term for ease of finding and understanding.

Terms & Conditions:

  1. The Client will be provided with the necessary tools to become a 'catalyst'.
  2. The Client will also have the opportunity to find a suitable 'weapon' and enough time to develop its 'unique magic' to an acceptable degree before coming into direct action.
  3. The Client will be provided with Aether medical care in case of graves injuries sustained while in battle.
  4. The Client will be provided with a 'Servant of Gaia' as a guide, the servant's level will be defined by the importance of the client in question, The servant has the responsibility for the client's actions and growth.
  5. The Client will inherit the responsibilities of a 'Magical girl', this includes neutralizing uncontracted 'catalyst' which may come in many forms, such as 'Devils', 'Natural Magic Users' and 'Fallen Angels'.
  6. The Client has to be registered in the rankings of magical girl weekly to grasp the client's progress and capabilities.
  7. The Client doesn't have the responsibility to interfere with uncontracted individuals that are residing within Gaia's Realm but can do if he chooses to.
  8. The Guardian Angel has to report to the Client of any unconventional and suspicious Aether signals for investigation and safety.
  9. The Guardian Angel will need to provide the necessary information that the Client requests.
  10. The Client can refuse 3 battles each month if they see fit.
  11. The Client has the right to have an 'Alias' once it reaches a certain level of popularity.
  12. The Client has prohibited showing non-contracted individuals the use or existence of Aether.
  13. The Client can associate with other contracted individuals if they want to.
  14. The Guardian angel can have a say in an organization built by a group of contracted individuals.
  15. The Guardian Angel needs to monitor and advise the Client to grow his Aether Pool and Aether container.
  16. The Client has prohibited the use of Aether for harming the general population.
  17. The Client Has strictly prohibited the experimentation on angels of any kind.
  18. The Client needs the permission of a High ranking angel in order to enter Gaia's realm.
  19. The Client has prohibited the use of Aether for harming or destroying his Guardian Angel.
  20. The Guardian Angel has prohibited the Harming of his Client.
  21. The Guardian Angel Has prohibited Interfering between Client-to-Client affairs, even if they result in fighting.
  22. The Guardian Angel will have permission to fight its Client harms it, experiment on it, or kills it.
  23. The Client has strictly prohibited 'Bounty Hunting' other Magical girls for the sake of it.
  24. The Client has strictly prohibited the terraforming or intentional weather change for non-combative goals.
  25. The Client has strictly prohibited Working with the Military to go to war with a foreign country.
  26. The Client has Prohibited the use of relics as Superweapons.
  27. The Client has Prohibited the pursue of ancient relics like the 'Ark of the Covenant'.
  28. The Client can't have any contact with extremely ancient and dangerous Individuals that can't perish, such as Cain or Iscariot.
Aether Coating

Often shrunk to simply 'Coating' is a technique that anyone can use, it consists in concentrating aether around your body to either harden your own attacks or blocking someone else's, it is considered a basic technique so veterans used it automatically.

Magic Types

Magic in this world is controlled by aether, everyone can use aether to some extend, but only those that have been declared 'catalyst' can use 'magic'.

  • Unique Magic

It refers to the magic that is unique to each person, it greatly varies from person to person coming from earth manipulation, Making usable portals, or shooting fire.

Because of the sheer amount of different types of magic, the angels have decided to make 2 distinct classifications (After the previous ones proved confusing or useless), this classification only provided general behavior but is neither exact nor completely correct, the classifications are Caster and Operator.


  • Caster

It involves magic that can be conjured from nothing, it doesn't require a material, an action, or an existing 'thing' in order to work, caster generally don't have complete control over their magic once it activates or fires.

  • Operator

It involves magic that requires something in order to activate, that can be a material, a weapon, or an event, Operators tend to have greater control over the magic even after firing it, with an impressive degree of customization and creativity.

Magical Girl Star Ranking

The star ranking is a way inside magical girl groups to identify the perceived 'strength' of an individual, at 3 and 6 stars the power of individual spikes up for unknown reasons.

Feats one could accomplish based on ranking.

[0 Star] - Beat an Athlete.

[1 Star] - Minor property damage.

[2 Star] - Mayor property damage.

[3 Star] - Completly destroy a House.

[4 Star] - Level an entire building.

[5 Star] - Destroy an entire city block.

[6 Stars] - Cause Major natural disasters.

[7 Stars] - Could raise a small city to the ground.

[8 Stars] - Be able to carry a war by themselves.

Having fewer stars doesn't necessarily mean you can't beat your opponent, it just means that it will take a lot to do it, for the frame of reference, only 4 people have managed to get to 8 stars.

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    Hakura
    Status: ch 28: lovable bruiser

    A very very good magical girls story. The MC and the secondary characters are all well developed and fun to follow. The lore is also very interesting. The best magical girls story I've read.

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