It tells the story of a man named Rainier Beringer, a 25-year-old young man who failed to become a normal human; for him, the world is just a place to accept all the bad luck he has experienced. Until in the end, he was caught up in an incident with a runaway mafia that resulted in him being shot dead. However, even though he was already in another realm. One of the gods from a different world summoned him and made him live a second life, where he could only obey one thing, which is "You must be an attractive spectacle to me, no matter what you do. Since I'm going to give you the status of a slave girl, create a world as you wish. ". Damn, why do I have to go through the same thing again?
The dialogue is too unrealistic, or rather, it feels like a script dialogue. The characters disclose anything they feel or think at talk. It feels unnatural.
It's as if author want to dictate readers what the characters feel, rather than letting reader interpret it themself. It makes the dialogues feels corny.
There's also problem of author most likely isn't english native. There's also problem of pronouns, and some words that feels out of the place. To say it badly, it feels like reading from google tranlate.
The premise and plot have potential. But sorry, it's unbearable to read more than this. Rating it 3 star, at least for the plot.
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Unreadable. Terrible grammar and flow.
Thought this had potential based on the summary but it is giving me a migraine trying to make sense of it. The writing structure feels like reading japanese through Google translate.
The author forgot to include that English is not their primary language.
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good story, although there are some sentences that need extra understanding. But I really like the story. Nice plot.
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