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The dialogue is too unrealistic, or rather, it feels like a script dialogue. The characters disclose anything they feel or think at talk. It feels unnatural.
It's as if author want to dictate readers what the characters feel, rather than letting reader interpret it themself. It makes the dialogues feels corny.
There's also problem of author most likely isn't english native. There's also problem of pronouns, and some words that feels out of the place. To say it badly, it feels like reading from google tranlate.
The premise and plot have potential. But sorry, it's unbearable to read more than this. Rating it 3 star, at least for the plot.
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Unreadable. Terrible grammar and flow.
Thought this had potential based on the summary but it is giving me a migraine trying to make sense of it. The writing structure feels like reading japanese through Google translate.
The author forgot to include that English is not their primary language.
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good story, although there are some sentences that need extra understanding. But I really like the story. Nice plot.
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