I'll preface this by saying I couldn't finish the story. I tried, God knows I tried, but after Chapter 4 I had to resort to skimming. The Author has a "lol so random" writing style, and while that works for some people, it really put me off.

The Good:

• There are few if any grammar and spelling errors.
• The author seems to know where they want to take the story and are moving in that direction.

The Bad:

• Exposition Exposition Exposition. It's an isekai, and you need to establish the world. I get that, but the way it's handled is just... grating. As an example: in chapter 2, the MC is supposedly being told stories about the world. Then, we get the MC's thoughts on those stories and what they were able to pull out of them. It would be better if we were told the stories straight up, and then the MC reacted.
• Dialogue. The author struggles with writing dialogue. This is especially apparent in the early chapter, and it does get better, but there are multiple instances where I had to stop and reread sections to be able to follow what was being said.
• Characterization. The characters, other than the main character, are bland and exist only for the purpose of interacting with the main character. This is especially bad with a character who goes from not liking the MC, to being willing to marry them, in <3k words.

Final score: I wish Scribble Hub would let me give half-star ratings, I would do a 2.5/5. I'll round up to three instead of down to two because the author has already shown improvement throughout the first seven chapters, the story just isn't to my taste.

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