Almost impressively bad, the MC is dumb as hell, weak as hell and the author very very obviously wanted to write a wiki instead of a fanfiction so here we are. A borderline non-existent story with insufferable protagonist syndrome that exists to be a template for someone else to hopefully write it better. 

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Don't waste your time.

A good chunk is just info dumps for way too many items and abilities that in actuality don't matter. So it feels like the author is just using it to pad the word count. 

If you are hoping for good dynamics and relationships between characters then turn around and leave immediately because the author clearly doesn't understand how to display the formation and growth of good relationships. 

The story is for the most part purely business and it basically reads as "I did thing a then I did thing b" with brief cuts of dialogue between characters occasionally. No characters are given time to show who they are and what they are about so everything comes off as bland. There are also no slower paced chapters where we can see characters interacting in a natural environment due to every chapter having to increase the power of the somehow.

I could go on for a while but the tldr is like I said first. Don't waste your time on this.

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Extremely bland. It's filled with a whole lot of texts of training progress and power-ups with almost no conversation in between.

The MC is cold and calculative even with his friends and allies yet girls just come to him like moths to a flame. There's no character development for anyone else other than the MC.

Funny how the author said he's writing this for money cuz I wonder which idiot would bother read this sheet much less pay money for it. The author copypasta a bunch of skills and abilities info dumps every few chapters just to increase the word count, and he doesn't give a sheet about readers' opinions on how to improve his writing style or correcting grammar mistakes either.

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I won't write much about the story itself, but when the character steals a bunch of weapons and relics just for the author to spend 2~3 chapters describing them and their functions without progressing with the story and then another 2~3 chapters describing their fusion and the result obtained, and then something goes wrong or he acquires something new and spends another 2~3 chapters describing the new function. And this repeats over and over again, filling in information that will never be relevant again. He trains or receives super OP powers, for something to go wrong, lose them or have to change them, then he does it all over again, training or acquiring powers that he'll have to seal or abandon because it's too OP and to not get weak he does it again to adding more powers that you can't control, have to be sealed, or cause a problem.

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Info dump the series.

The pleasure of reading multi chapter info dumps on how the MC creates a bunch of skills, armours and weapons along with info dumps on their final description and statistics along with repeating the MC's status screen with minor updates only for shortly after these new things you spent an annoying time reading to be sealed, destroyed, lost or whatever shortly after for the MC to once again go into another creation/grinding/training spree with endless chapters of info dumps on creation, training and the results with item and stat descriptions etc for stuff you are more and more wondering whether they will be sticking around or if you once again wasted your time reading all the info dumps.

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The rating may have bugged, and display an incorrect value, so I'll put it in writing, this is worth 2 or 2.5 out of 5 for me.

To start with the good things, there is no signifiant amount of spelling or grammatical errors, and the reading is confortable.

The biggest issue is that the author fell into the trap of making his protagonist crazily overpowred, way too soon. I stopped reading the instant he stole almost every holy and demonic swords ever mentioned in DxD, as well as a few others to boot, while sitting on his sofa. And the tens of thousands of parallel toughts thing trivializing anything else.

The end result is that the self-improvement side of the story  became as interesting as driving on an empty highway, and since the MC doesn't have any active relashionship with anyone else at the point (aside from a friendship with a gender-bent Vali... really?), there is nothing left to make readers want to keep reading. 

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Really disappointed with this. Almost zero character development, wired justifications used for furthering plot, creating scenarios for depowering the MC, wasting time making him weapons just to add bs restrictions at the last minute. 🙄 Rate this a 2.0

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I am not even halfway thru the posted chapters and I can confirm the MC has gone through 4 different entire powersets.  Every time he gets one to a high tier, it either breaks, and he has to remake it, or some enemy that shouldn't exist shows up randomly and destroys it.  Over half the word count comes from just reviewing his character sheet with one line changed out of the 50 posted. Over half his progress gets wiped and replaced, so the 10 thousand words you just read about that ability evolution will get deleted within the next 5 chapters.  I'm not sure he has even kept a single ability without it being destroyed within a few chapters.

It reminds me of the cursed gamer if you took out all the good parts and only left really awful dog sh*t.  No character development and the harem is 20+ people.  Some harem members don't even have lines of dialogue beyond 10 words and have existed for 100k words.

Have you ever seen a TV show with a decent ending, but it was popular, so they forced another season, and it just ruined it?  This entire story is just that but repeatedly constantly.

I cannot in good conscience recommend this to anyone.  Most of the word count is dedicated to litRPG, but it fails as all the progress is constantly wiped away so that the writer can fill in more dog sh*t to pad word count to rebuild it with minor changes.

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Really sad.

The novel had so much potential, and when he/she wanted, the author explored well the relationship and development of the characters. Unfortunately, the novel became a leveling/power-up report filled with info-dump that rarely had its use, as the created/acquired abilities evolved, fused, got sealed, erased, and all, hardly made difference in the fights as the MC simply goes and 'bang!', the fight is over because X, Y, and Z abilities.

The author managed to explode some nice paths born from the MC messing up with the original plot of DxD and Fate, but in the end, they became background and foundation to more power-ups and leveling... sincerely, seeing status sheets so frequently makes this impossible to keep reading.

Hopefully, the author will refine this after some form of ending... 

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