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Total Views (Chapters): | 19,946 |
Average Views: | 712 |
Word Count: | 55,409 |
Average Words: | 1,979 |
Pages: | 202 |
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The story is good and it is too early to tell what MC will do so far.
The first chapter lacks an explanation of why the character is angry like did the god cast fire and brimstone on his/her world while leaving the person alive.
As I went further within the story, the majority of the focus was on the mechanics of the world, not character development.
All in all, the story has potential and he author can update the story and cover the questions that readers hold that are common in each chapter.
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One chapter has moved my emotions. Out of ten chapters that’s too dry. Maybe other readers will get more out of this. Author was smart to banish the MC with a partner but didn’t make their interactions interesting enough.
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