[League of Legends Fanfic]
A young man reincarnated in Runeterra, a magical world where all of his favourite yet hated video game characters lives. Follow his journey into this new world...
A/N: I FUCKING LOVE ARCAANE! I had to make a fan-fic. Writing for fun so don't expect anything high quality.
Short review:
The story sure has potential and I like the way our MC is interacting with the canon characters, although there is a lot that can be improved upon (especially grammer)
A little bit longer review:
Style: the prose is ok but could be better, the sentences (sometimes) don't really flow into each other, at times they seem really choppy and some paragraphs are a bit repetitive in their word choice. The quality in this aspect varies a lot. It's something than can only really be improved with practice
Grammer: here I have the biggest issue with the story. It has many grammatical errors every chapter, although overall the author gets the meaning across, the story would benefit a lot from more proof reading as most mistakes are easy to spot and rectify聽
Story: Not that much to say as of now (ch 7) The plot is in it's infancy but as I mentioned before, I like the character interaction.
After some good polishing, I think this could really be worth your time and I would gladly pump up the rating to 4/5 or 4.5/5 stars. In the end I would really like to love the story but I can not convince myself to give more that 3/5 stars as of now.
I hope this review was helpful and not discouraging for the author. It is not some kind of bashing or hate because of the relatively low rating but an encouragement to improve and give some clues where to start.
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Definitely have expectations for this! It's good!馃憣
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This is a really good series the characters feel like actual people the plot and dialogue is very good a good read
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Not really a fan of league but the lore is interesting. As I read the story I do love how the MC interacts with lore characters and actually isn't afraid to do so. The writing is also decent to the point it is easy to understand. I wanted to give this a solid 5 but I'm not that far off the novel yet.
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Very good, the only decent arcane fic around that I managed to find, great character interactions, MC could use some development himself, so far not much is known about him other than powers and relationships. Feed me moar chapters.
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Good so far, I like the interactions between the characters.
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