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It's OK-ish. Read it if you're bored, but don't get invested.
There are several inconsistencies:
But by far the worst of it is
the fact that the MC's quest to bury his (in his perception) just-deceased wife starts with picking up a new woman. Seriously, just days after coming back.
If the author ever rewrites this, he needs to remove Kazu. The MC picking up his daughters and going to bury/say goodbye to his wife/their mother would be a much better story than this.
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