Normally I don't write reviews or even comment on  much unless something screams to me that it needs attention and normally  only about things I care about. I read big long books mostly high fantasy and sci fi stuff like Robert Jorden, Braden Sanderson, Jack Campbell, J. R. R. Tolkien. George R. R. Martin... I think you get the idea.

Anyway since most web stories are wrote by amateurs or people doing it as a hobby. I don't hold them to the same standard  because almost everything would be found wanting and I could slam almost every story if I  was expected a story from a master story teller and  expected relative perfection.

however this story right here... this  author has my respect  even if I hold him to the same requirements as the above authors, He has made it.  If he continues to write at the same level that he's currently writing well I think a "masterpiece" fits just fine. currently I have no issue comparing the current story to Lord of the Rings, Wheel of Time, Game of Thrones ect ect. I'm not going to go over pro's and cons with this story because I don't have any cons to talk about. To me 5 stars means as close to perfection as possible so if I rate something at 4 stars it's a damn good book but this story gets 5.  world building, characters and character relationships plus the plot and story pacing is just about bloody perfection.

I can't think of anything I dislike about the story aside from from the feeling you get when the next chapter button is greyed out lmao

If I didn't know any better I would expect this to be a multi book story and I would also would not be shocked if I saw in on a best seller list or being sold in a bookshop. to any readers out there. If you want to read a book on this site, hell any of the web novel hosting sites  do your self a favor and give this a go. I can be hella picky so if I like something it usually means most would like it

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1st In my reading list, This story is great, that being said 9 naughty out of 127 chapterers don't in my opinion qualify this for the smut tag as smut is usually contains the naughty every other chapter. That said I'm really looking forward to how this story develops further.

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writing is good but the author just be writing too many useless info to the point that I completely stopped reading. And please make sure to include the harem tag so that people like me accidentally don't stumble into it. It was addicting, till I started to see how he was so willing to f*ck anyone who came asking to him. I still endured and persisted, but I just started to get absolutely disgusted as his companions started increasing and shyama had no complaints about it. It still gets to me how people are willing to share or even fantasize about sharing something so intimate with another. I don't wanna stumble into something like this ever again.

yk what the best part was when annit said *no* to blue. I hoped the book wasn't harem I really did but ofcourse the author has really sophisticated writing and he could write an absolute masterpiece if h wanted to. I wish he can write something more committed. This  stuff is just not for me

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I feel like this novel might get passed over due to the lack of tags or the tags used. This is an amazingly crafted plot story with tastefully sprinkled in smut. Great pacing with new fantastical things added just often enough to be interesting but not so often that it gets bogged down. Perfect use of the high fantasy setting with a mix of new and inventive races and a unique soft magic system.

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Really good story development with a mature overall theme. There are some points that may be questionable in our world but the crafting of their world and the standard understandings of that morality are different. This is a well written story and I am excited for more days as the journey continues. I am really pulling for Iniri and Ansae as companions. 

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Really good, it's nice. I really enjoyed the Delta Dungeon series, and decided to come back to look for updates, but came across this. Highly recommend if you don't mind some smut (very nice and kind of heartwarming smut) and some "nice" but not "pacifist" dungeon mastering.

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It's really good.

It took me some contemplation to come out with that as my review, but now that I have a start I feel I can ramble on. I have spent the last four days binge reading and unable to set this story down, to the exclusion of all the stories I have been following and to the point of staying up far too late at night reading, and reaching the end has left me with a complex feeling that boils down to satisfaction and appreciation. 

I certainly did not expect much out of the norm when I started, as it says on the tin it is a fantasy dungeon story with adult elements which are an established trope. This one, however, is very well written. It also manages to nicely execute several things that are often attempted but rarely done in a satisfactory manner, but I won't leave spoilers here. 

Rather, I just encourage you to enjoy this story.

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I picked this up because I was looking for a relatively well written, mature harem story. That's rarer than you'd think.... And I got what I wanted, sure, because that's what this is. But more than that, I was surprised by how much I've enjoyed reading this novel. Blue's growth as a "dungeon", his tinkering and the author's knowledge of crafting are fascinating. The story is well told and compelling. I expected smut, and got a novel worth reading without it.

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It's interesting  but from the last 10 chpaters I've read it becames boring, plain. It procedes too slow with the plot  with too much useless informations. Well if you are ok with a LOT of chapters with useless informations that you can easy skip because unrelated with the main plot I guess it's really good. I don't like to skip chapters so for me it's a no 

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Excellent story. Even if you literally skip all of the explicit scenes this story holds up all the way to the end with fresh ideas and challenges to be overcome throughout. Finally, the authored tied it all up with a pretty little bow at the end.

 I do not feel that a five star review is an exaggeration in the slightest for this story, albeit closer to an online novel due to the length alone. Bravo

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