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Word Count: | 195,222 |
Average Words: | 4,648 |
Pages: | 710 |
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It's a really good fanfic. The spelling and grammar is decent and does improve over the almost 200k words (the chapters are long which is great). The updates seem to be slowing down in recent months but seems to be mainly due to lack of reader comments and all-round engagement. Still, it doesn't seem like it will be dropped, so that's a positive. I honestly don't know why so few people read this story. It's a great story about Naruto being thrown into the Fairytail world and actually developing and learning. Instead of throwing rasengan around like an idiot, he plans and, while strong, he is still hard-pressed with some enemies. Also, it's not like he transmigrated and suddenly his personality changed, there are reasons for why it happened. If I had any problems with the way it is written, the only thing that sticks out is the descriptions of characters when they are introduced are really long-winded and I couldn't really picture the characters. It was like the author was looking at an image of the person and described them in detail, but it isn't easy to know what they're trying to convey without looking up the image yourself. Idk. Not a big issue. If you watched the ft anime, you would probably know the characters anyway and the details would help clarify the details. Anyway, it's a good fix and I suggest you give it a go. *Note: Author, thank you for not dropping this story despite the lack of comments and likes. You are an inspiration to all self-published writers. I'm gonna look at your other fix's now. And now my hand is sore, lol. Not used to typing on my phone. Have a good day.
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