Basically: I'm not a writer, just pouring out my unfiltered story here.
A typical self insert, very slow start and slower progress. Dungeoneering, fighting, daily life, shifting focus on OC and MC. Shovel to the face with little gained, but trouble is unending.
NO increasingly impossible high stakes, NO gods/demons pulling the strings (just the setup), medium suspension of disbelief.
Very little magic until much later, no cute waifu in sight...damn, all of the above sounds depressing.
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For a better fanfic Story on Prison School, if you haven't, check:
Hitoyoshi and The Prison School by Shadowdream30
on
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13937444/1
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My Intro:
I heard the devil whisper and clasped its pitch black hand when it offered me Light Novel MC level benefits.
In my defense, I was neck deep in Divine waters washing away my existence, clearly I wasn't thinking straight!
So here I am, in a hellish prison of my own making.
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Cover by Asarai, retrieved from https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2196241?q=prison_school
This is a work of amateur fan fiction that draws upon the original source material of Prison School. Please support the official release of Light Novels and other media.
I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content related to the series and its author, Akira Hiramoto.
It's pretty fun and entertaining. A good fanfic to read, of course it has rough patches, but it's a nice story.
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Not very good, it's blindingly obvious the author has no clue what he's doing.
The main characters name is Valentine? For some reason the author thought this horrible name was ok, and the authors writing constantly throws the cringe name in our face because it's his "writing style". So the MC is basically whiny and straight delusional, he freaks about stuff that only happens because the author wants it to, which is not good storytelling.
Anyway it's subpar and frankly annoying to get into, but it's palatable almost, so give it a try or don't, just don't get sucked into reading it because of the undeserved high ranking
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