I rarely write a review (I'm lazy) but after reading chap 35 I just couldn't bare it anymore, everything was going well. Even if there were some things that doesn't made sense, you could use the all mighty "anime logic" too past it, but the unnecessary drama at a point where everything was going well and everything was so cute, just ruined it for me, worst part is that it doesn't even makes sense.

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In a wholesome confession from the main heroine, just as they are about to kiss and "seal the deal" HE READ A MSJ FROM HIS F-INGPHONE, HE the one OBSESSED with this girl, at that MOMENT, decide to pick his phone? BS

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I have tried to read works from this author and he just every time ruins it for me. I know I have to expect drama, even so at least make it less forced. Good luck to readers.

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Chillfire02

Status: twist in plot!

Mar 1, 2022

I love this piece of fine art!

The MC is very well written and is, I dare say, an original or maybe a refreshing one among the ton of japanese stuff. However! Fret not as even if the names are japanese this novel has no bullsh*t that one see in the mass produced japanese manga/novels of nowadays.

I absolutely love this and the story is very engaging, small grammar mistakes but nothing to fret about.

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Basically a man trained to be nothing but a soldier and killing machine from birth had a small side hobby... Playing a dating sim.

What do you know? He died and is now the bully of the MC inside the game so he, as a straight forward soldier and honest man, accepted his lovely family stopped bullying and even confessed/dominated the girl he loves and started training the wimp weak MC as our guy is a fit young man who knows a lot of martial arts or any other form of combat technique due to his origin.

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I give it a solid 4.5/5 and hope the author (check all his other works by the way, they are really lovely) would start posting more of it.

Edit: sorry for any mistakes, english my second language (best excuse of all time!).

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Post update: after some two dozen chapters, the MC seemed too perfect or it felt unnatural the way a lot of the female characters got attracted to the MC. Idk, but its still a good reader. Recommended.

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SISCOG

Status: helping others!

Dec 5, 2022

Eh, there is no proper reaction for the MC change in behavior everyone accepts it too easily the grammar is passable but not that good the MC is too perfect so maybe it's good for other people I don't like it

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Xindium

Status: c0

Feb 6, 2023

The MC appears to be a typical perfect man. He was raised as an heir and trained to suppress his emotions from a young age. Despite this, he somehow possesses a compassionate side, which he attributes to his grandfather's teachings. Which makes no sense with the background story we've been told. However, there is also a disturbing aspect to his body past, as he was previously involved in bullying the protagonist to such an extent that it caused the protagonist to avoid school. This event seemingly only briefly mentioned without being thoroughly addressed or resolved.

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StrangeNova

Status: chapter 93- confession

Sep 12, 2023

The story was pretty good... Until

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the author decided he did not want to commit to either harem or non-harem, therefore deciding to create two different routes (or more) where the protagonist either goes into a harem or not.

If you're into harem or into multiple endings, then it's a solid 4 stars (perhaps even 4.5), but to me the harem route simply seems out of character and forced (though I did not read that route, nor the monogamous one, so I cannot tell for certain if it is indeed forced)

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The grammar is fine, but not amazing.

Still, thanks author for the story.

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