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Golden Fox with System
Golden Fox with System
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The Brazilian Theo Volts, 18 years old, reincarnates in the body of a (Red-fox) in another world when dying being struck by lightning. After reincarnating, he realized that he was endowed with a miraculous game system.

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{Edited by: Andrew Meyers}

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ActionAdultAdventureEcchiFantasyHaremIsekaiRomanceSlice of Life
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Cultivation Fantasy World Transmigration
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      New 1xtime
      Status: 76
      Oct 8, 2019

      Story is Intriguing.  Story at the start was good  and there is only 2 things where this story fail fr my point of view 

      1. Author really loves writing about food to the point I feel he should be writing a story about a chef instead of someone aiming for higher power.

      2. Relationship were being done good specifically with the red fox, they started going downhill for me where the author felt that the MC should somehow be a Loli collector while pretty much stalling the relationship that was build with the fox. Like why the f**k would he trust a random person he save with the secret of the system literally 2 hours after saving them. And as always adding the adopted daughter trope to cockblock the MC and red fox as soon as they achieved human form.

      One chapter the MC was a pervert looking at breast the next he dont want to f**k when he is able to because lolis keep being added just really stupid

      My point is why make an MC pervert to cockblock him with lolis unless he is a pedo, in which case say it on the tags so I dont bother reading (no to mislead no pedo yet)

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      New Doxkid
      Status: c5
      Sep 30, 2019

      This is very roughly written. At the very least it could use a good proofreader since this reads like a story written by someone doesn't speak English fluenty, but the actual writing style itself is also offputting because of just how casual everything is. 

      Reincarnated after dying? "Aw shucks! Oh well. Guess I'll live here then."

      Fox mother is injured? "How sad. Oh well. Guess I'll fix it."

      Mass slaughter of lesser creatures just to power level? "Meh."

      Ideas come to him out of nowhere for plot convenience, he doesn't bother to really test himself, maybe an hour after gaining the body he is a natural at BEING that creature, he doesn't really put any effort into figuring out why he has the system... the minor issues are endless, but that's just nitpicking.

      My main issue is that so much is simply TOLD to us. Show don't Tell is a literary staple for a good reason; at the very least if the author did more Showing and less Telling then each chapter would be twice as long as three times as good.

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      Jemini
      Status: 7 beginner pack
      Aug 12, 2019

      I am only at chapter 10 out of the 70 or so written, so this is only a review of this first portion of the series so far. Still, from what I've seen, I think I can make an evaluation at this point.

      Basically, whatever you pictured in your mind when you read the title, that's exactly what you get out of this series. It is a fairly basic wish-fulfillment series where the fox just gets stronger with the help of the system. It is a fun read to pass the time if you are into wish fulfillment, but it could use some help with the writing.

      It is in serious need of some editing. It is filled with redundancies, such as "I was sleepy so I went to sleep, " or "I opened the bottle and took the pill out of the bottle" as well as fairly basic sentence structures like "I was running, he noticed me and was running at me. We were running at each other." (The author has a very bad habit of repeating the same point several times, especially during action scenes.)

      So, there is a lot of sub-par writing to get through, but it is not an entirely unenjoyable series. I am half tempted to offer my services as an editor for this series if only I had the time for it. I will be continuing to read in order to see if the story actually goes somewhere interesting and doesn't stay to just this basic wish-fulfillment stuff.

      (Also, the action scenes need some serious work. The author definitely does not know how animals fight. Animals pounce, use their claws to pin the target, and then finish them with a bite. However, in this series, all the animals seem to just swipe with their claws, and for some strange reason doing so blows the target backward like they were punched. This bit of unreality really breaks the immersion.)

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      draghnov
      Status: c43
      Jul 25, 2019

      Ch 43 / 63 and I don't have to continue to read to write this review, not once this novel let me down, truly good.

      Some things can still be improved but given how fast the writer improves, there should be almost nothing to complaint about at ch 63. 

      I strongly recommend  xD

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      Fuxy
      Status: chapter 90
      Aug 15, 2019

      It had pretty decent start to be honest but it's slightly starting to loose its edge with the introduction of modern like technology.

      Then again I'm not really bothered by wish fulfillment novels as long as they make it up in other areas like world building, exploration and discovery without the common pitfalls of standard clichés we've read hundreds of times.

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      Roughshot
      Status: chapter 117: selling weapons part 1
      Sep 25, 2019

      Very much a wish fulfillment story, but at the same time it makes it an interesting read as well.

      I'm genuinely pleased to read about an MC that uses his brain and his brawn. There are obviously small plot holes, minor flaws and a good layer of plot armor but all told this is an enjoyable read if you're looking to kill time and put a small smile on your face from the sheer adorableness of little Yui and her family.

      All told, worth your time and consideration.

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