Ahem, Everyone I don't mind being straightforward. But, honestly I find it a little bit uncomforting when literally most people stop at first chapter because it's bad. Even rated it so low.

I know it's bad, because I wrote the first 8 chapters about 2 months ago. Intending it to be a straight harem h*ntai. 

I advise you to read the other chapter beyond the other first 8. I don't mind being criticized from my shamelessness. You can criticise my work because that will help me a lot. It may help me improve.

Also thanks to those who reached the latest chapters and did not give up midway.

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very poor. No development of tempo. Characters feel like they are all doped on aphrodisiac and ready for f**k.

This is only for those looking for a quick jerk off. Just read the summary & then go to chapter 1 & then jerk off.

Most probably those who rated it 5 stars where either here for the quick jerk off so they gave it 5 stars or they don't have much knowledge of literature.

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This novel got the unfair treatment. Yes, I agree it has a lot of Errors specially the grammar, but it's not to the point where you can't understand using your F$%&ing 'Common Sense'. Actually, the author did a great job writing this story and the grammar! Considering English is not his Mother tongue. Give this novel a chance. This novel can still grow.

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I read the reviews and did as the author asked. I gave the story a chance beyond the first 8 chapters.

Here I am, in chapter 11 and still disappointed.

The story lacks proper presentation and conveyance. The author's reasons for writing this are clear enough. However, he's not giving the story its proper value by imagining the scenes as hentai videos or maybe scenes from visual novels.

Before jumping into smut like he did in the first chapter, he should have gone with some world building and character presentation. He could have made the events of the first chapter a flashback if he's adamant on having the MC be a rapist.

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I comed into this novel for s*x, stayed for story!

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I've read better plots on porn sites. Characters aren't even two dimensional, they're one dimensional. Some of the explicit scenes are decent, others seem rushed. The gyaru chapters were clever. Magic power explanations are painful. Additionally, the grammar really is poor; though I'll admit it noticeably improves after the first dozen or so chapters.

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Even if the themes here appeal to you, this is still rather bad.

Author keeps emphasizing to read beyond chapter 8 because those early chapters were akin to the plot in porn, around where I dropped this novel, it has indeed lowered the amount of smut, but that hasn't made the story particularly better.

The longer the story goes on the more it feels like the plot of a bad anime or bad Chinese cultivation novel, things happen not because they make sense but because the author said so.

I give it 2 stars because some parts were entertaining, otherwise it's only 1 star.

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Didn't even make it past the first chapter, it was that bad. I only started reading this novel because it was so high up on the popularity chart while searching "protagonist strong from start" because I was sick and tired of reading the same child to adult, 250 chapters long, power up/training arc. I didn't hold out much hope for this novel as even the description of the novel by the author has bad grammar and has really basic sentence structure. It's as if he is not a native English speaker or is still learning English at the middle school level. I've come across some really great story ideas in the bowels of scribble hub that are ruined by an author not having a good grasp of the English language., unfortunately this story idea isn't original or that creative. The first chapter reads like a poorly made porno story and I gave up considering the lack of effort in the description and narrative of the first chapter.

On my way out I figured I'd check the reviews to get a laugh at what others have said about the novel, then I came across the authors plea to have readers slug through this mess because it supposedly got better. Why would I or anyone invest time into a story where the author admits the earlier story is crap but is also too lazy to go back and rewrite it to bring it up to his "Current" skill level? I mean you can't even find the time to rewrite the novel description or the janky first chapter? Are you that pressed to keep the creative juices flowing for your army of fans who are demanding constant updates? You even seriously have a Patreon...

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