I just caught up, and I like this story very much. It's very well written and I like the fact that it doesn't focus on the main cast and their troubles as much as other fanfics, but rather the author in creating their own story.

The MC is very human, and the story is a bit sad. But it's very good :)

Though I there ware a couple sentences that seemed to be half missing or a word was missing from them.

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mon5y-san

Status: arc viii chapter 11

Apr 20, 2021

this is good a novel. Because it doesn't read like fanfic.

it's a seinen. No romance nor fullfillment.

when you see what's happen to side characters in naruto, you may think 'yeah, that kinda f**ked up'.

this novel potray world outside perspective of main casts. Bleak world that all ambiguous/leftout details from cannon was filled with pragmatism, insanity.

happiness must be obtain with power. Ruthlessness to protect one's life. Life is un fair. Sacrifice is an option.

such is what the world this novel protray

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ConsideredSuicide

Status: c0

Jan 18, 2024

This is not the worst. There are many worse stories. This has a better structure, and better writing than many on this site, and there are several good ideas in the story. But do not misunderstand; That does not mean this story is good, or even written well.

This is merely an isekai to have the isekai tag. The story does nothing with it, the protagonist never investigates, and the story would be the same without that plotpoint. They occationally reference it, but the story gains nothing from it, and it doesn't change the protagonists actions or outlook in any way.

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Speaking of the protagonist, they are bland, boring and unimaginative. They have some major cheatskill, not related to chakra, but it is still chakra (??). The author doesn't seem to know what they want their protagonist to be, sweet and caring, or needlessly cruel and meanspirited. The only fact is that they are a one paragraph Mary Sue, with ties to the Uchiha, great power, comes from wealth, admired and envied by everyone, and too smart to fit in. You expect them to be humiliated at some point, and having to rebuild their self-esteem, or find a new way to approach the worl they are in, but I quit when I was half-way through the story, and they still have not been meaningfully challenged.

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I did enjoy parts of it, but in the end, it struggled keeping a consistent tone, had confusing transistions over time, badly written characters and a lack of focus and motivation.

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Spyro_9978

Status: arc 11 chapter 7 m

Jul 17, 2023

One of the best fanfic I've read. With a protagonist that has her personality and flaws, it brings a freshness to Naruto fanfics with a plot that diverges greatly from the usual stuff and let's you read another side of the shinobi world. I also need to thank and congratulate the author because of the efforts he put into rewriting a lot of the story to upgrade it's quality. If you like the tags you won't regret reading this.

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SaucyHug

Status: arc xi chapter 8

Jan 19, 2023

This IMO is a scribblehub masterclass on how a female protagonist should be written from a male perspective. I don't think the most grumpy incel naruto fan will have a problem with this MC. I have to say binging this while playing games was a pleasure to listen to. The cadence of the writing was on point. I love the fact that she picks a fight with everyone satirically.

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