This is just porn. The plot is quite simple and feels... sort of floaty, and clearly only exists to introduce new characters s*x toys specters. Yeah, the characters don't feel even remotely like real people, they are clearly just machines of lust out for the MC for no explained reason, yet; I expect there to be some super pheromones involved, but even if that's it, it's immaterial to the story and characters; they are thirsty af, full stop.

Oh, the grammar is great though, a bit simple, but not maddeningly so :Ü™

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All in all, not a bad read. I’ve seen better grammar, and I’ve seen WORSE, so I’d reasonably rate this readable, just on the grammar alone. I won’t say if the story is worth reading or not, because that’s up to you.

I will give a rundown. 

First, the setting. We open up with a pretty standard routine. Our MC wakes up, and through some mysterious intrigue, have turned into a woman, by no means their own will. At least they kept their manhood intact. I assume you know what a Futanari is. I can add a pretty standard operational definition at the bottom, I suppose. 

Then we meet the first unique character. Our now female MC gets dragged away into what will now be the main place she’ll stick around in for now, and there are plenty of characters (romance-able? Mayhaps! We shall find out!) It would seem that no one remembers the “previous” MC, as if the male version never existed, but we won’t dwell on it too much. There are girls that need filling.

The plot is, reasonably, erotic. This is an Erotica. In case it is not clear, the story revolves around s*x. The MC will go around and romance some characters. Some will approach her, some she will pursue on her own. There is a reasonable amount of dialogue. Just enough that you get the day to day slice-of-life as she works on being turned into a Futanari. Not too much that you get bored, because, as I have stated, the story is about s*x. She will have s*x (Is the seggs word really banned? Just making sure.)  

The MC’s thought process, is, put simply, chaotic. I assume it’s meant to be comedic. One moment she’s calm. Then her thoughts are swinging wildly. If this were a webtoon, I’d imagine her thought boxes having multiple chibi faces representing her inner turmoil. She is, at least, resolute in some things. Like who she will and will not romance. Once she has accepted someone as her partner, or potential partner, she will focus herself (mostly), on making a good impression. And if she doesn’t, then she doesn’t.

The progression is acceptable, for an erotica. I’d imagine it’s something akin to a rom-com. S*x-com? Anyway, the mood is largely lustful, and comedic. If you were expecting a serious story, you may want to lower your expectations. If you want soul rending arcs and sensational drama, then this story isn’t for you... yet. If you’re in the mood for a lighthearted, lusty, slightly comedic read full of NSFW happenings and a decent Futanari character, this might make your list. 

Oh, and insofar, the characters are all female. There was this douchebag, the arrogant prick, but it got dealt with, appropriately (with copious amounts of violence) and we have the sweet grade-schooler, who will no doubt get our MC on the FBI’s interrogation room for something she actually, un-trope-likely, didn’t do. 

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