In an unexpected turn of events, Harry Potter's Horcrux is removed by the Basilisk. Being called the Heir Of Slytherin certainly effected Harry. What will the Wizarding World do when their courageous Boy-Who-Lived broke his shackles and emerge as a new person? Will the Wizarding World recognise Harry Potter as a threat or he gets his chance? Strong, Smart and Grey Harry.
This story, for me at least, had a kinda rocky start. The horcrux is removed, he’s suddenly stronger and smarter than ever, he gets a familiar, acts like at totally arrogant asshole of a child (though some of it was deserved, in some cases he was judging a book by its cover: though I’m not certain about that as I haven’t read Harry Potter in years), and that sort of stuff. It isn’t bad, or even unrealistic, but it isn’t really something that I enjoy reading much when it’s that extreme. It does calm down after a bit, or at least is less in-your-face about it. Another small complaint is about characters treating the MC like he’s the centre of the universe and immediately forming deep emotional bonds with him. Not only that, they are immediately loyal and believe the MC is always in the right. Even members of the ministry of magic. An extension of that is just character’s relationships and emotional reactions in general being a bit forced. Despite that, it was an enjoyable enough read and I will be continuing to read it. Thanks to the author for creating this story. (Writing comments and reviews on a phone is a pain. I can’t even make a line break) !
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Very good fanfic. I really liked the storytelling style (especially at the end)
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