This is awful. Author wasn't kidding when he said he wasn't a native speaker, its barely better than an MTL.

Lots of P.O.V. Changes don't help since the story is already hard to understand. Do yourself a favor, and don't read this story. I already want to tear my eyes out.

Oh, and after the teleport incident, he's magically brought to the same area as Rudeus. Bad grammar, no creativity equals a waste of time. Save yours for something else

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I won't dispute that there is some awful grammar in the story, but I won't claim it's so bad that you won't want to read it. I'd say it's not too horrible. There's no need to overstate how much you despise the narrative.

To summarize,

- It's the narrative of Claude, one of the three bullies from the beginning of Mushoku tensei. He's a Miko, and he got the memory after Rudeus threw the waterball at him when he first met Sylphy. He was given the capacity to read his own memory from another universe where he was dead. He can't think that much as a 5-year-old child. As a result, the MC will learn about memories and knowledge on the go.

-It is yet unknown what his talents are and how they work. The author didn't mention anything about how he evolved and trained in his early days, not even in the first chapter while he was locked in the dungeon.

-Rudeus's POV he develops to deliver infodump is very repetitious, but I find it entertaining as a webnovel reader myself. It's kind of nostalgic.

-The author's narration of the story is somewhat repetitive, but not excessively so. This strikes me as a foreshadowing of something that will happen in a later chapter.

-Too many points of view I can tell the author is still new to this. So he brought in too many diverse points of view.

-The grammar is poor yet not unreadable. It's not really that horrible that you'd take your eyeballs out... overly dramatic.

-This is not a story for individuals who want the Author to lay their cards on the table. Consider the hint the author hid in the story. It is too difficult for children to grasp.

TLDR: It's still amusing to me, and the concept is brilliant. However, the author's delivery of the story is still not as awesome.

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This is an unexpectedly good novel that I can recommend to anyone that enjoyed Mushoku Tensei. The characters are good, the story is in my opinion very good and the grammar, while it does have some issues, is good enough.

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Seems like the story was rewritten. The multiple povs and the special abilities of the MC weren't clear at first due to the writer's, bluntly put, awful writing. Even after being edited thrice the first chapters are still at the level of a mtl. The Grammar is bad. No other way to put it. The story goes through a rapid a somewhat jarring slowdown in pace (approx ch30). Feels weird to read and it's obviously ameturish writing.

All this said however, if you're able to stomach the grammar, the story is actually pretty good. The author is improving his writing skills and the re-edits are readable. Overall, great story, just needs a good editor 

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It was a good read I hope author keep making new chapter, also author please learn how to make love because it's make me confused how you describe the pov (pov is the reason I give it 4 star)  

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