Cernlia: the human kingdom closest to the story's main locations, bordering on the Great Forest. This country includes the Lyns March, on this border, which includes Neralt Village/Forest's Haunt and Fort Forest's Watch.
Nerlia: a neighbouring and allied country to Cernlia, and currently in conflict with the elves.
The only polity of elves for a large distance. It contains little more than the City of Ariedel, inside the Great Forest. It has a largely democratic structure and a professional military.
Mentioned so far:
Alianais, goddess of Change and Progress
Benerron, god of Struggle, colloquially called god of monsters
Deirianon, god of Peace
Leianaleine, a minor goddess
other major gods: Gediarno, Etainas
Enais of Ariedel (or Enais Eltarianal), Special Minister in the Free State's government;
her daughter, Anuis Eltarianal, Forest Ranger (at first appearance), elvish officer; Bianorn, another elvish officer; Niolin, a Commissar; Ceinelis, a (former?) noncom; and others
Tikelikel, Light Mind, and Tikimaken, Unbroken Rock, gnomish merchants and members of the Historicals faction.
Pernaken, Unbroken Rock, government agent (?).
Perikeman and Erdeken, Tikimaken's friends/acquaintances.
Commander Serdakeni, Captain Ediakin and General Aliekin, officers.
Dekilakel, leading member of the Historicals.
Beware of spoilers!
Members of the hive: [(Only some charactes will be mentioned, I don't want to list every drone.)]
Regina: Hive Queen. Our protagonist. Has some knowledge of a more technologically advanced world, but no corresponding personal memories.
Max, her first drone, Warrior; Tim, same; Mia and Tia, Workers.
Bea, Ina, other Workers, and Ben, Dan, Zoe, Eva, other Warriors.
Ada, Scout; Ace, Ash, also.
Ivy, Harvester; Zac and others as well.
Len, Lou, Lea; Shooters.
Ira, Via, Ray, Ria, Attendants.
Ken, Witch.
Jem, Ida, Keepers.
(various others.)
A small horde of nameless Swarm Drones.
Dark and Arcanis, integrated monsters.
Janis, demihuman (see entry under 'Cernlians').
Humans from Cernlia who have so far appeared in the story:
Baron Elric Neralt, lord of Forest's Haunt; his relative, Marianne Neralt; Alan, a soldier; and others.
Janis, aspiring mage, recently from Forest's Haunt (listed here for convenience's sake; may not be (entirely) human); Sir Richard, her relative; Marian, her aunt.
Marquis Lyns, the lord of the march; his daughter, Lady Kiara Lyns, an Arcane Warrior; his wife and her mother, Lady Florance Lyns; their younger daughter, June Lyns
Derrek Zephyr, a high-level Thaumaturge in the service of the king.
The Brazen Blades, a mercenary/adventurer group signed up for the war: Ulric, Weaponmaster; Gavin Barkle, Cleric of Alianais; Oswald Oak, Shaman; and others.
John Cern, a Cernlian lord, and assorted followers.
Earl Alain Whitor, of the county north of Forest's Haunt/most of the Lyns march; Sir Edmund of Whitedale, his bastard son
Duke Bluegrass, a supporter of Marquis Lyns (and especially Kiara); his eldest daughter Margaret; followers including Baron Caleb Theraln and others
Delvers who have so far appeared in the story:
Sir Egon Trito, Blade of Light; Eric and his team, including Elenia Wood, Bound Blade; Sir Rodrick, Elite Blade of Light; Sir Owin Castaway, Steadfast Knight, and Gwen Cern, Bard of Battle, senior Delvers; and others(This lists some basics the characters know about the System, may not be complete or even entirely accurate.)
Stats: Con (Constitution), Str (Strength), Dex (Dexterity), End (Endurance), Int (Intelligence), Wis (Wisdom)
Stat points are usually assigned automatically, with one point given for each level.
Humanoids, Demihumans and Monsters: People and creatures are generally divided into being humanoids like humans and elves, demihumans, and monsters. However, these are somewhat artificial distinctions. In principle, humanoids and demihumans choose a Class, while monsters do not have one. Humanoids cannot level up further than Level 10 without a Class.
Tiers: Every twenty levels, at levels 20, 40 and so on, people undergo Class Evolution (colloquially) or Class Progression (the technical term). Monsters undergo Evolution, which includes physical changes. Demihumans may also undergo physical changes when evolving/getting a new Class.
Abilities: This includes Class Skills. These are special features granted by the System that would not otherwise be possible for someone to do or have. Skills can be active or passive (or appear to be both).
Spells: Spells are usually exclusive to those with mage-like or adjacent Classes. They require having a mana pool. For a Spell, mana is shaped according to a specific pattern, which may be granted by the System for leveling up or learned from books or teachers, or even discovered naturally. Spells take a certain amount of mana from the user's mana pool to create a variety of potential effects. Spells can be upgraded to more complex (and costly) Spells.
This story was hit and miss with me. With many good points and interesting ideas. Such as the MC reincarnating as a Hive Queen and using her advanced knowledge to help her hive out. But also some pretty harsh probelms with the story. Such as a naive and stupid MC, which I just can't bring myself to enjoy. As of chapter 78 thr MC has revealed one of her greatest weapons to her enemies on purpose and even got herself caught by a magical net because she thought it would be a good idea to not pay attention in battle while flying in the sky right in the middle of a fight. She did escape the net but then landed in the middle of the enemy. Anyone else would be dead because of this. I would of personaly shot an arrow into the head of an enemy general who was just zoned out in the sky who was spying on talking enemies instead of facusing on the fight. Don't even get me started on the MC using fire spells on a fire wolf and saying, "That wasn't very effective." Like duh it wasn't effective, use your magic missile... That thing that lets you put a hole in someones head. Not many people like reading a story about a stupid MC. Unless for comedy reasons. This is just a couple of examples. There are many silly moments that could prove fatal. Most of the horrible moments come from the MC not deciding on weither she will be a frontline general or a general in the back leading her forces with perfect cohesion. Now me saying all this doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the story. This is just a critique of the the writing for the MC. The story definately has alot of potential and I am hoping that this will help put things as a outside look in at the story so that hopefully the creator can write a better story.
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Love this story!! Just finished reading to lastest chapter, had a blast honestly, too bad I'll have to wait for new chapters now. Everything is Fantastic, although the plot could be progressed faster in my opinion... still it's not too bad to make you drop the story, instead it brings depth and enhanced attachment to the story. The MC is a normal character with no edginess and dumbness. The author potray's the MC wonderfully and allows the reader to connect or atleast imagine the MC as a "Normal Human Being (minus the human) " which is rare in novels and mangas.
Would definitely suggest reading this book, this is really good if you want something new other than those necromancer novels to feed the inner war/army monger.
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Fantastique world building, I really like the evolution of the Hive in this story and how they juste try there best with absolutely nothing at there disposition!
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Great story, starts fine and gets better, the further you read. I recommend this novel strongly! :D
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Honestly, this novel has it all. The background of the world is very interesting, the mystery of the lost civilization, the relationships between the existing factions, good characters with their own stories and of course the hive that is the center of it all. In essence a novel with a lot of potential for greatness.
One of the things that has intrigued me the most, is the relationship and struggle that Regina has between the instincts as queen of the hive and the human mind (culture, morals and knowledge of the modern world). But it's a shame that usually the human part wins over the instincts, especially when the latter are right.
Now the bad thing, as bad as a light flashing in front of you as you read, is the main character Regina. She is very naive, impulsive and honestly does not learn. Regina has no capacity as a leader in any aspect, be it politics, diplomacy, intrigue, military strategy, warrior or management.
Regina is incapable of understanding her duties and responsibilities not only as queen of the hive but has the last hope of her race (She is the only queen). In many cases she is responsible for the tragedies and problems of the hive for being incompetent or naive. Simply It is painful to see her fail over and over again without learning anything. And the worst thing is that no one corrects our protagonist and tries to teach her, since the members of the hive give her the reason without questioning her and the others take advantage of her.
Literally our protagonist Regina has been saved from the disasters she herself has caused by a goddess twice in a row. (Plot armor)
Without understanding anything, read chapters 77 and 78 and tell me if it is to make you despair.
If I had to sum it up it is the story of a 10 to 12 year old girl who is forced to become queen of a hive with modern knowledge and without having experienced the world for better or worse. The author is a competent writer and has a very good imagination.
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It's not really about insectoid species, it's about humans with some insect traits attached.
Otherwise, characters are decently written, are able to communicate properly. Also, a rare 3rd person perspective for novel on this site, and it is written properly with little orthographic or grammatic mistakes.
Story is a bit slow paced, but as it is going to be about interaction between kingsoms it's the usual. Politics are slow.
Characters so far didn't have to show much, with protagonist as exception. She seems capable and is not reluctant when it comes to dealing with threats. A blessing to see some semblance of an adult, considering this site's overabundance of young adult/teen leads.
World is our usual gods driven fantasy with monsters, elves and xenophobic humans. System is not reliant on health, for once, so what damage body recieves - stays. No dumb surving at 1hp bullcrap, even if your head is barely attached.
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This story is good, and that's pretty much it. It's not an amazing story, it's not a bad story, it's simply just a good story. It's a safe story. There are no guilty pleasures, no power fantasy, no painful scenes, no disgusting characters, no plotwists, and so on. It's just a simple safe story done well, with good world building, believable characters, and a barely believable world.
The reason it's 3 and not 4 stars, is that there's a forced female empowerment, best way I can describe it, throughout much of the story. Much of the story is focused on anti-s*xism and realistic gender roles, while slavery doesn't exist, xenophobia is relegated to words, and starvation is a thought. I'm trying to say that it needs balanced out by other personalized things. That it feels like we're modernizing the world for gender equality and nothing else. Though, if it were removed instead, you'd have the safest story I've ever read.
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