A setting of near future Earth and a VRMMO, the story itself is solid, with excellent characters and interesting world building. Few to no grammatical errors, which is always wonderful. 

MC falls into the power category of “exactly as strong as he needs to be, ” facing very few physical setbacks while hitting every emotional issue at full force. 

The harem aspect follows the Spaghetti Theory (straight until wet), leading to a bi-harem with a straight dude. This is partially addressed in story due to a shift in values in the near future, but it’s addressed suspiciously close to second girl’s appearance (/s). 

There are minor political statements, but nothing typically considered controversial in the US among average aged readers (15-30).

Overall, an excellent read!

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The novel switches between the MC's casual confident personality in the VR game and MC's still casual but meek personality in real life. All in all, I enjoyed all the random talks between the characters until they got really too heavy with their fetishes. I think this story should in between 3.5 to 4 though I am giving bit a 4 as it is one of the stories I read.  

Now about something which I think should be really explained or changed about the novel. There is not even any Girl's Love tag on the novel. Even though it looks the MC is just a clickbait used for the girl's own harem even though they were not bis*xual before meeting him. It's as if he has a strange power to turn girls bis*xual.

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Hy. Im Lynnsgard

I read others Ace story, but im really hooked to this one.

Its Harem and very realistic one. Its combine reality and fantasy (on VR) very well. If you read Sevens, Mushoku tensei, and Pure love x insult you will love this. Mature romance and great plot, I love it.

But You will dis pointed by 3 genre. Adventure without Action isn't good combination, but well ace lack on action scene. Litrpg without StatusBar is not normal?. And everyone whos love slow romance tag really hate dense protagonist right? But Im glad Fenrir not as dense as Shonen Protagonist. I recommend this story because other than that its almost perfect.  Oh No, I forget. 'Rock' make this story perfect!!. 

Thankz for this story

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The VRMMO used in this story has a lot of potential, but has a weird strain of s*xual mechanics blended in that is used to force the plot forward.

Meanwhile, the protagonist is extremely disappointing. His life consists essentially of gaming, hentai, chips, and alcohol, showing no willingness to improve himself until he's already won the hearts of two girls. He complains to his long-time friends about how he always does what they want while they never do what he wants, but we never actually get to see that. Instead, we see him mope around until he gets them to throw all their time and resources into making his dream come true. He even intentionally wastes resources so there won't be anything left after he's happy.

Finally, there are GL, BL, and polyandry subplots, some of which are legitimately connected to the plot and some of which feel like they're just a platform to dunk on traditional relationships, especially since the only traditional relationship depicted up to this point is an unhappy one.

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not really my kind of read it has some very neat ideas but it focuses a lot on the part I think are its weakest aspects it also falls into a trap I feel a lot of harems fall into which is to just keep adding and adding to the harem without really developing a cohesive romance 

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The way its written was Okay, the concept was also pretty good, its just that it was pretty boring, it was pretty hard for me to read the MC's dialogue, yes he was virgin so it should be understandable for him to not have experience with women, it wouldnt actually matter if his virgin or not, the problem come with how the MC reacts, his like a little kid always blushing with every thing involving romance, it was painful to read as I cringe just by reading his thoughts... then there was this time where MC keeps on crying when he thinks of something quite dramatic, thats pretty unmanly to say, I'm not saying that a man should not cry, but then again, a man should be a man (If you get what I mean), there are only a limited times where a man should show in front of others that he is crying, for example, the death of a loved one, thats pretty acceptable, but crying over in front of 2 girls because of not being able to go fishing?? God! my hairs stood up to how cringy it was, MC's thought are way too... how should I say this? gross? cringey? I dunno, in short it was body-shuddering! The 1st chapter was pretty catchy but the following chapters after all that was pretty boring! just as it was said in the synopsis, MC is obsessed with fishing hence youll have to suffer reading boring chapters about fishing! dont get me wrong, I love fishing, but in this novel? it wasnt just right.... then there is this sudden romance, God, how fast it all progressed, they bare even met for a month then they become all trusting and caring? considering that the MC said that there were many time girls trying to get close to him and get is trust by being the one proactive in flirting with him only to end up duping him, he still did the same with the 2 girls that was 1st introduced? doenst that make him pretty stupid? The romance was even pretty sudden and unrealistic, I mean, he confessed to 2 girls he barely kkew on public while acting all awkward, but before he confessed, he knew the 2 girls liked him and he liked them back so he concluded that he would have a harem! not even considering whether the 2 girls would be able to accept sharing him, and that were the problem comes in, the author was probably too lazy so he just let the 2 girls accept it easily, I mean, they accepted it readily without any problem at all, was it because they only knew each other for days hence it was so easy? LOL, its pretty hard to explain, just that it was too unrealistic and fake... well anyway, its not like everything I said would be of any use.. it was really cringy

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