I'm not gonna beat around the bush. The story is pretty generic, the grammar needs work and the MC is cringey as hell. But I gotta say this is f**king entertaining as hell.
You just need to turn your brain off and enjoy the action because that's the best part about this novel. It's pure shonensh*t pumped straight into your veins.
Overall decent. Just two things. Author, your gender tenses need work. You tend to swap the words he and she a lot, which makes things confusing. And second, what the hell is with the "brown baby" fixation? If it's meant to be a running joke I get it, but it's still weird.
The story is good. Nothing really new in genre but clearly better then many others. MC is not a beta and mostly likable. Heroines are believable and not one dimensional. Plot is cliche but well executed and enjoyable to read.
It’s a good story and one that I deeply enjoyed. Some subversion of expectations and a focus on what would have normally happened made this stand out for me.
I enjoyed the story overall. Gender pronouns seem to sometimes mix. It is also satisfying to read with an interesting plot and inspirations derived from other works
Austin was a kid that loved to watch Anime, especially Pokemon. Annoyed at how the series was going after Sinnoh, he fell asleep before waking up, somehow as Ash the morning he began his journey. In shock at what happened he tries to find a way to
“A soul must Re:enter the absolute substance whence it has emerged from. But to accomplish this, it must develop all the perfections, the germs of which it has planted within itself”
“If it does not fulfill this condition during one life,
This is a slow-burn isekai story about a young girl named Siya who was born with a weak body into a world that only cares about Strength. Because of this, she isn’t able to even use the only thing she has going for her, a knack for strategy, which
To be crossposted on Royal Road
Our Protagonist on their death bed managed to bargain with death, meet a god and strike a deal that was in all honesty too good to be true.
Waking up in a forest of who knows where, with nothing but a v
I'm not gonna beat around the bush. The story is pretty generic, the grammar needs work and the MC is cringey as hell. But I gotta say this is f**king entertaining as hell.
You just need to turn your brain off and enjoy the action because that's the best part about this novel. It's pure shonensh*t pumped straight into your veins.
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Overall decent. Just two things. Author, your gender tenses need work. You tend to swap the words he and she a lot, which makes things confusing. And second, what the hell is with the "brown baby" fixation? If it's meant to be a running joke I get it, but it's still weird.
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The story is good. Nothing really new in genre but clearly better then many others. MC is not a beta and mostly likable. Heroines are believable and not one dimensional. Plot is cliche but well executed and enjoyable to read.
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It’s a good story and one that I deeply enjoyed. Some subversion of expectations and a focus on what would have normally happened made this stand out for me.
Looking forward to Volume 2.
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I enjoyed the story overall. Gender pronouns seem to sometimes mix. It is also satisfying to read with an interesting plot and inspirations derived from other works
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