ok this novel is good. I like MC it is well written, I would like to learn more about its history from my previous life, it is nice if a bonus chapter was created. I don't like its cool version a bit. I hope he will not treat his women as conquerable Pokemon and forget about them, there is nothing worse in harem tales as forgotten women of the protagonist. And I would anti-hero >>>Vilian
I have enjoyed the story so far and can't wait to get up to date and hope for more chapters in the future, however it is a bit hard to read due to how the sentences are structured and the grammar mistakes, thankfully it isn't bad enough that I would lower the rating more then 1 star so I went with a 4 star rating.
Literally the worst grammar I ever encountered. I can't think of any word other than 'terrible'.
Also the premise and dialogues are pretty bad. They could be good, if gar was good, and they had some more thought put into them, but alas. They are bad.
It feels like it can be a pretty nice novel, but for now it really is bad.
I am not really that good at writing a synopsis but here goes nothing,
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Synopsis:
An ordinary soul is reincarnated in the Marvel multiverse as a New God, the son of Odin and the Phoenix Force. He is considered a mutant amon
ok this novel is good. I like MC it is well written, I would like to learn more about its history from my previous life, it is nice if a bonus chapter was created. I don't like its cool version a bit. I hope he will not treat his women as conquerable Pokemon and forget about them, there is nothing worse in harem tales as forgotten women of the protagonist. And I would anti-hero >>>Vilian
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Grammar is quite bad but readable.
The s*x is good.
MC is OP, his system can do everything. Instantly make girls attracted to him, off security cameras, give him skills to control people...
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I have enjoyed the story so far and can't wait to get up to date and hope for more chapters in the future, however it is a bit hard to read due to how the sentences are structured and the grammar mistakes, thankfully it isn't bad enough that I would lower the rating more then 1 star so I went with a 4 star rating.
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Literally the worst grammar I ever encountered. I can't think of any word other than 'terrible'.
Also the premise and dialogues are pretty bad. They could be good, if gar was good, and they had some more thought put into them, but alas. They are bad.
It feels like it can be a pretty nice novel, but for now it really is bad.
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