By beast_regards
There are many possible fates that can await those whisked away from our world to another.
Some became heroes or villains, given the right power to forge their own destinies as they wished.
Others, the powerless, became victims, doom
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It's not a romance.
It has an interesting start. An adolescent boy is leaving home to experience life. He makes some money in the dungeon and buys a slave. So far so good. Quite a few enjoyable novels start that way.
Sadly the protagonist shows little to no affection for his partners. He lies, deceives and manipulates them. It all just feels like a casual relationship to satisfy his desires and perversions. The narration of the smut scenes is good, but the atmosphere lowers the entertainment value quite often.
So far the protagonist has shown no noteworthy character development, only his stats grew, but he didn't mature at all.
Onomatopoeias are used excessively and broke my immersion quite frequently.
If you don't care about affection in a relationship, reading it might be time well spend, for the comedy is entertaining.
If you are looking for romance, look elsewhere.
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honestly the idea of skills is great, the novel is well written, the parts of smut are great but the protagonist is sh*t and his parents too, he is deceiving and lying unnecessarily to people who like him, first of all could tell the slaves everything without any problems since they can't tell secrets, he says he loves the girls knowing he doesn't, has s*x with more than one girl behind the other's back, deceives one as if she had a risk of getting pregnant giving her hope, then every time she sleeps he applies the contraceptive, the relatives are another piece of sh*t, people who don't know how to respect opinions and everything has to be the way they want, anyway, the idea of the novel is good but it was executed with the wrong protagonist.
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This novel is really enjoyable - and it was a pleasant surprise to read, despite the somewhat suspicious title.
It's a standard, but also pretty generic, litRPG novel told in a 1st POV. Everything in it so far, has been explored before by other novels. But don't get me wrong, it does everything that a standard Isekai litRPG should do, really really well, and it focuses on those point. Good humor, easy to understand system, slice-of-life plot that's easy to follow, romance, and good pacing. It doesn't introduce anything new and groundbreaking or tries to reinvent the wheel - it just does what makes the core of an litRPG novel really well. Which, imo, is praiseworthy.
I'm looking forward to seeing how future plot and "plot" development will go. I hope it doesn't turn into a full-on erotica (read: porn) novel - but paces the inevitable ero stuff with proper plot development, with emphasis on character interaction, character development, romance, and dialog. This is what I truly feel is important: romance, character interaction between the MC and his coming slave (s?), character development, and their dialog, as we continue to explore the world and the ever expanding plot.
In short, this novel is a solid litRPG, with a bit of comedy, some smut. Nothing new and groundbreaking - but does it have to be when it does the basics so well? Imo, no. It's a great read nonetheless.
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This is a pretty good story. The concepts and systems are very interesting and is quite logical for a fantasy story. The only flaws with the story would be the amount of grammatical errors present. Obviously things like this will improve over time. Surprisingly there's a lot of character development and things don't just magically fall in place for the main character. If it does it's explained by the rules of the world and different power systems being used. The main character himself is a great and well made character. What do I mean by well made? He is what the author intended for him to be. A perverted teenager with just above average intelligence that usually listens to his desires rather than his brain. Some people who have read this story felt disgusted by the actions of the main character but his actions all make sense when you think about his goals and his personality. This is not a romance story simply a story where a boy wants to become powerful and be surrounded by beautiful women. In fantasy stories similar to this usually the main character has morals, pretty good ones and won't take advantage of people he is currently in a relationship with. This one does have morals but are very different from the others. Which is what makes him so interesting. [/Spoiler]An example of this is when he starts a relationship with another woman despite already being in a relationship with his slave. (A consensual one. WHICH TOOK EFFORT!). To start this new relationship with this woman, he had to use the power systems of the world and lie for her to accept him.[/spoiler] He is not a good person he is rotten beyond belief with some serious problems but just because the character is a bad person doesn't mean they are a bad character. If you don't mind following a main character led mostly by his desires and like the fantasy as well as adventure genre then this is perfect for you.
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It seriously triggers me that he can use 90% xp discount, but for whatever reason keeps using 60%. That is 4x difference and nothing in the story indicates why he does that, after all the difference in cost is negligible. Overall, this is decent r18 novel with slave harem, pretty much what you would expect from tags. Writing quality is decent.
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