Update (29/08/2023) : I started a complete revamp of Void Rifters, revising and polishing each chapter one by one. Since my writing style significantly improved over time, you might notice a great change in quality. I'll also use this occasion to remove all the outdated author notes and fix the typo.
The chapters that have been edited will be marked with a '|EDITED|' above their title. The current progress will be updated every ten or so chapters in the synopsis until completion.
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Waking up in an unknown place with thousands of other humans, the specimen B213-84 does not know how he ended up here, nor does he remember his previous life. After being abducted by a superior race called the Scyllas to fight for them as a battle slave in a galactic war between 2 dimensions, after undergoing different modifications to both his body and mind and being forcefully fused with an unknown black matter, how this lowly lifeform, who was once a human called Jun-Yeob, will be able to survive the war and get his revenge ?
Book 2 :
After so many years fighting in vain and suffering atrocities, he was finally ready to die during what should have been his last fight, when suddenly, a new rift opens and behind it a completely different world awaits him.
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! The fantasy storyline starts from a different pov in chapter 7 and the transmigration comes in the second book, from chapter 40 !
> Updates schedule: 2ch/week <
! Sometimes I post at night and I edit the chapter the next day !
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new review:
I've read everything up to ch20, the story is really good and I like how you develop the plot and the characters.
I got confused by the multiple time skips in the last chapters, but I understand why you've done it.
Even if I like the whole 'army building' thingy with all its strategic stuff, I would like to see the story focus more on the MC in the next chapters.
For the writing, there are still a few spelling mistakes here and there, but no more major grammar mistakes and I can feel your writing getting better and better. You just have to compare ch20 with the first chapters, the quality improved a lot.
To resume : I love the story, the MC is smart, the writing isn't bad and I hope you will keep releasing it regularly. :)
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old review:
There are still some spelling mistakes, but despite the language barrier the writing is still readable and the quality isn't too bad. The story seems interesting, I hope it won't be too long to get new chapters and the story will not be too spaced out.
This changes from the classic sci-fi cliche and from what I understood with the disclaimer the story will soon refocus on a magical world ? (I guess this is the fantasy part)
I don't know how it will turn out but I hope it'll be done well, the concept is interesting. I've read a novel not too long ago which mixed sci-fi and fantasy, unfortunately the more the story progressed the more the sci-fi elements disappeared, so I hope this novel will be different.
Keep going in this direction it's a good start I might follow your story once it gets more released chapters. Good luck !
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