Never have I imagined that my first relationship would come this abruptly. Some days after I lost my most precious people in life, another person appeared who surprisingly became my most treasured being. I love and adore her but not compared to how much she does. It's not like my love is a fleeting cloud. No-no-no. I love her very much but she...
"Kayo. Have you done something with Saki sensei?" I asked worriedly as our homeroom teacher suddenly disappeared just a day after she gave me extra classes.
I had a clear doubt about the culprit so I asked her directly.
"Nothing much. I just sent her to a faraway place where she won't be able to see my love again in her life". I gasped.
" You dont mean..."
"Ah, I didn't kill her. Just sent her to another nation with a better job and she must be happy there." She gave me a smile which made me relaxed at the same time mesmerized.
As one can see, my girlfriend(wife), is a yandere who refrains herself just because of the marriage promise I have given her. Even with her dangerous behavior...I love her and always will until death does us apart.
The main character is kind of a wimp but it's fun to read the main heroine even has some stab-bilities as all yandares do 5/5 would stab again
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The story is sweet and wholesome. The MC is kind of weak minded now but I hope he will have a character growth. The FMC is sweet and cute AF. I love everything about her and the best trait = Yandere.
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one of the best romantic novel with such a cute and fluffy fMC. I have began to love yandere after reading this
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This is very new for the yandere genre usally in this genre the ML hates FL and the FL tortures and kills the ML's family and everything he loves in front of him. This is your very average normal yandere route if you considered it a game like I do, but this is maybe the new revolutionary yandere genre in 2022. Hahaha this is very exciting
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This webnovel is held back significantly by its grammar. Grammatical errors and awkward or unnatural phrasing plague nearly every sentence — and I mean that literally. Mistakes are everywhere. If you're the sort of person who's bothered by errors, this novel will be utterly unreadable for you.
Grammar aside, the writing itself also has some fairly big flaws. This is most obvious toward the very beginning of the novel, where it really felt like the story rushed waaay too much to introduce the FMC and kick-start the romance. Something that, in my opinion, the author did at the expense of proper pacing, storytelling, and logical coherency.
Point in case:
The story leads off by having the main character's parents straight-up abandon him to flee the country, never to be heard from again. There were tons of ways to write this sort of scenario in a way that makes some semblance of sense, but instead we got the laziest cop-out possible. While this is by far the most noticeable example of bad writing, it unfortunately isn't the only one.
That said, there's one important detail to keep in mind while reading this: this is a wish-fulfilment novel. You won't find excellent writing, beautiful descriptions of scenery, brilliant foreshadowing or symbolism, or anything of the sort. But that's not why this novel exists. This novel's sole purpose is to satisfy the reader's desire for a cute yandere romance. It isn't trying to take itself too seriously, nor is it trying to be some kind of professionally written masterpiece. It's just there to fill that void in your heart. To give you some reprieve from the loneliness wearing you down. To give you that oh-so-sweet high you get from reading a sweet romance with a clingy heroine absolutely obsessed with the MC. And that's something that, in my opinion, this novel does flawlessly.
Does this novel have its issues? Absolutely. But most of them, in my opinion, don't matter for a novel of this caliber. The main essence of this novel, the romance it centers around, is perfect as far as I'm concerned. The only thing holding it back is the grammar which, again, is seriously awful. But overall, I would still recommend this to anyone who craves that sweet, no-strings-attached romance and the irresistable feeling you get from reading about it. With an overhaul on the grammar, this story would easily be a 5/5 in my books. And in no way am I the sort to throw that rating around lightly. That's just how good the romance is. But, because the grammar and phrasing are straight-up garbage, it gets a 3/5 instead. If you don't care about bad grammar, definitely give it a read! Otherwise, don't waste your time.
Also, don't be fooled by the chapter count. Everything after chapter 24 is just a copy-pasted blurb whining about finances and redirecting you to a different site you can go to to read the novel.
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The story is good but why the hell is this story a stereotypical romance story where the MC is so annoyingly stupdly non realistic acting like a saint and why the hell he keep refusing the fMC huh? Like a stereotypical male character even though they dont exist in real life and because no male human like that in the world and also why the hell does it take like billionyears for them kiss whats more the indirect kiss take them like thousand chapter to happen huh?
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