The story of a reincarnated man named David who found himself in a world of magic in the middle of a industrial revolution and a opportunity to learn from the most prestigious academy in his kingdom. The world is very different from what David is used to which makes him question his common sense at almost every turn.
Sir, if you read this, it means that you are on the right track. My only advice is that the pace is a bit fast but it's fine. Thanks for reading
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This work's very promising but it's written very badly. Needs a lot of work on grammer and setting. Also, it's not exactly info-dumping, but the character and situation descriptions need lots of work.
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