This work's very promising but it's written very badly. Needs a lot of work on grammer and setting. Also, it's not exactly info-dumping, but the character and situation descriptions need lots of work.
Alastair Carter is a 27-year-old marketing and management teacher like many others around the world. Well… maybe besides the fact that he teaches some of that world’s prodigies, but it’s just a small detail. Even though he loves
Sir, if you read this, it means that you are on the right track. My only advice is that the pace is a bit fast but it's fine. Thanks for reading
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This work's very promising but it's written very badly. Needs a lot of work on grammer and setting. Also, it's not exactly info-dumping, but the character and situation descriptions need lots of work.
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