- Half-Step Unification Realm (Spiritual Path)
- Level 10 Fusion Core Beast (Beast Path)
- Peak Level Ethereal Soul Realm (Body Path)
Dual Cultivation Technique: [Celestial Maiden Ascending to Heaven] Grade = Immortal Rank
Normal cultivation technique: [Convergence of the Celestial Bodies] Grade = immortal Rank
1.Presence of Celestial bodies: [Sun coat]+[Moon coat]+[Star coat]= [Celestial coat]
a. Presence of the Sun: [Sun coat]
b. Presence of the Moon: [Moon coat]
c. Presence of the stars: [Star coat]
2. Absorption of Celestial light: [Dawn], [Dusk], [Midnight], [Day and Night]
a. Absorption of Sunlight: [Sunrise], [Draconic Noon]*, [Sunset]
b. Absorption of Moonlight: [Crescent Moon], [Wanning Moon], [Moonless Night], [Full Moon]
c. Absorption of Starlight: [Starry Sky], [Shooting star], [Starfall],
3. Connection with celestial bodies: [Celestial Field Master].
a. Connection with the Sun: [Scorched Sun Domain]*
b. Connection with the Moon: [Freezing Moon Domain]*
c. Connection with the Stars: [Star Night Domain]* <-Here is Yasenia
4. Celestial bodies and spirit as one
a. Spirit and the Sun as one
b. Spirit and the Moon as one
c. Spirit and the Stars as one
5. Celestial bodies within my hand
a. The sun within my hand
b. The Moon within my hand
c. The Stars within my hand
Yasenia's mother. Her 173 cm tall figure is slim, and her facial features are 7/10, like her daughter. However, instead of a charming appearance, she has an elegant disposition and transcendent aura that makes people want to kneel.
Her raven black straight hair reaches below her soft and perky butt, and her red eyes radiate an imposing light.
She has Death and Fate attribute energy, and her weapons are two; a white guitar with black engravings and strings called [Fate Weaver's Guitar] and a long sword called [Death Dragon Bone Sword]. Her constitution is called [Death Devouring Seer]
She has a muscular yet lean body with an impressive 197cm of height; however, her womanly charms are not underdeveloped. Her tanned skin and light green eyes only make her beauty rise. Her personality is calm, and her disposition makes her look heroic. Together with her tall, toned body and facial features, she appears like a war goddess.
Her attributes are Sun and metal, and her battle gear is one silver full body armor and a golden-black halberd. Her constitution is called [Profund Molten body], and her bloodline is from the [Sun Eating Tiger].
She has a petite height of 155 cm but a contradicting body with big breasts and an athletic butt. She has a head full of golden hair that reaches her knees and is as silky as satin. Her face enthralls purity, and her facial features are soft, giving her a very innocent and soft disposition. Her big blue eyes are slightly moist and droopy, making her gaze even more tender.
Her attributes are light and glass, and her weapon is a glass mirror shield, which she uses as a catalyst for her light attacks, making her a walking laser weapon. Her constitution is called [Scarlet Heart's Prismatic Crystal Body], and her bloodline belongs to the [Light Molding Glass Swallow].
She is crowned as queen of ice, be it for her personality or strength. She has 175 cm of height and Platinum BLonde Hair that reaches below her knees. Her pair of narrow yet cold light blue eyes are enchanting.
Her facial features seem to have frozen, yet she is very beautiful, giving an ethereal feeling and refreshing fragrance. She is an archer, and her attribute elements are Moon, Wind, and Space. Her constitution is called [Lunar Yin Body], and her bloodline is called [Moon Phoenix bloodline]
She is rather average in facial features, and she is flat-chested. She has 166 cm of height. However, her striking electric blue hair and piercing violet eyes give her a good appearance.
She is a chatterbox and speaks about anything and everything. Her favorite pastime is sexually harassing women with big breasts. She uses a spear, and her attributes are Light and Lightning. Her constitution is called [Lightning devouring body] and her bloodline is called [Light Storm Thunderbird]
Kali was one of the most beautiful women in the
outer disciples. She had chestnut-colored wavy hair and verdant green eyes. Her
facial features were delicate, and with a slender body and 170cm of height, she
was a sight to behold.
Valeria is the First Nature Spirit, usually known as the [Nature Spirit Queen]. She is three meters tall with a curvy body and a thin waist. Her skin is a very light and glossy green, looking smooth and tender.
She usually wears a floral dress that shows off her deep cleavage, and her temperament is gentle and mature, similar to a mother. However, her anger is terrifying.
Her iris is green colored, and she has golden vertical slit pupils. Her primary element is Life. However, she has control over most things related to nature.
Currently, Valeria is Kali's strongest summon, guardian, and teacher. Their relationship is very close, and if it weren't because Yasenia and Kali being a couple, they would've probably fallen in love with each other.
An ageless Mirror called the [Truth Mirror]. Her previous master was called Fu Jing Jing, one of the Saints of the Universe. However, after certain conditions, she becomes Angel's weapon.
Her spirit body is similar to Angel's, her master. However, she had combined the height of her previous master. Therefore, she is like a mature version of Angel with red hair and green eyes, and she is much taller, at 175cm tall.
She is attributeless, as she is a Natural Treasure. However, she works best with cultivators with a pure heart.
She is an [Sun Engulfing Ore Lobster], specifically, the princess of her race.
After entering through a portal, she met Andrea, who took a liking to her, and instead of killing her befriended her.
Both of them went through some situations and created a Blood contract, becoming Andrea's contracted beast.
She is a little small for her race and very young. Therefore, instead of a lobster, she looks like a hermit crab.
Her shell is made of powerful minerals. Her preference is purple, pink, and golden minerals. She is very innocent, easy to scare, and a bit cowardly.
However, she trusts Andrea a lot and is loved by everyone around her although her personality is a bit arrogant and domineering.
A Wolf Queen Evelyn found in a snowy mountain. She had trouble with her clan, and after Evelyn helped her, she decided to follow Evelyn as her contracted beast.
Her fur is white, and her eyes are blue. She controls attributes related to a blizzard easily, and her physical prowess is high.
She is a giant wolf. Her body is eight meters tall and growing.
Her personality is cold and detached. However, she has opened up to Evelyn and her companions and acts like an elder with them. Taking care of them silently and watching them grow.
[SPIRIT CULTIVATION REALMS]
Meridian and Dantian Creation Realm: Level 1-9 + Half-step = Level 10.
Body Modification Realm: Level 1-9 + Half-step = Level 10.
Mental Nourishing Realm: Level 1-9 + Half-step = Level 10.
Unification Realm: Level 1-9 + Half-step = Level 10.
Dantian Spiritualization Realm (End of Mortal Realms): Level 1-9 + Half-step = Level 10.
Transcendence Realm: ???
Demigod/Law Creator Realm: ???
...
[BODY CULTIVATION REALMS]
Initial Foundation Phase. : Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Mortal Transformation Body: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Spiritual King Body: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Ethereal Soul Body: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Epoch Core Body (End of Mortal Realms): Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Undying Monarch Body: ???
Immortal Emperor Body: ???
...
[SOUL CULTIVATION REALMS]
???
[BEAST CULTIVATION REALMS]
First Rank (Mortal Core): Low-level (1-3), Mid-level (4-6), High-level (7-9), Peak Level (10).
Second Rank (Evolved Core): Low-level (1-3), Mid-level (4-6), High-level (7-9), Peak Level (10).
Third Rank (Mind Core): Low-level (1-3), Mid-level (4-6), High-level (7-9), Peak Level (10).
Fourth Rank (Fusion Core): Low-level (1-3), Mid-level (4-6), High-level (7-9), Peak Level (10).
Fifth Rank (Legendary Core): Low-level (1-3), Mid-level (4-6), High-level (7-9), Peak Level (10).
Sixth Rank or Legendary Beast (Mythical Core): ???
Seventh Rank or Mythical Beast (Star Core): ???
....
[BEAST BLOODLINE REALMS]
Mortal Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Beastly Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Magical Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
King Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Monarch Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Mystical Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Legendary Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Mythical Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Divine Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Ancient Beast Bloodline: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Immortal Beast Bloodline: ???
Primordial Beast Bloodline: ???
[DEMON CULTIVATION REALMS]
Adult Demon: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Baron Demon: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Viscount Demon: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Count Demon: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Duke Demon: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Demon Monarch: ???
Demon Sovereign: ???
...
[DIVINES CULTIVATION REALMS]
Initial Divine: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Cleansing Divine: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Mind Palace Divine: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Purity Divine: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Core Dominion Divine: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Throne Cleansing Divine: ???
Ascendant Divine : ???
...
[SPIRTS CULTIVATION REALMS]
Spirit Embodiment Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Essence Fusion Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Soul Resonance Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Elemental Dominion Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Spirit Core Harmony Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Primordial Unity Realm: ???
Divine Convergence Realm: ???
...
[UNDEAD CULTIVATION REALMS]
Unlife Spark Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Living Corpse Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Consciousness Building Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Soul Devouring Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Corpse King Realm: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Specter Corpse Lord Realm: ???
Corrupted Fiend Sovereign Realm: ???
...
[SPIRITUAL TREASURES RANKS]
Mortal Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Spiritual Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Magical Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Earth Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Heaven Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Transcendence Grade Items: Low-level, Mid-level, High-level, Peak-level
Supreme Grade Items.: 1-10 Stars
...
- Chapter 793. Exploring and Crossing the Obstacle Course. Eira’s Speed.20 hours ago
- Chapter 792. Crossing the Second Floor’s Desert.Apr 14, 2024
- Chapter 791. Arriving at the Second Floor.Apr 13, 2024
- Chapter 790. First World Summit Trial and an Accident.Apr 12, 2024
- Chapter 789. Reaching the First Destination.Apr 11, 2024
- Chapter 788. Scorched Earth and Frozen Land.Apr 10, 2024
- Chapter 787. Tense Fight.Apr 9, 2024
- Chapter 786. First Confrontation.Apr 8, 2024
- Chapter 785. [Nine Silent Fang Sect]’s Schemes.Apr 7, 2024
- Chapter 784. Lottery. Embracing Tranquility.Apr 6, 2024
- Chapter 783. World Summit Rules.Apr 5, 2024
- Chapter 782. Conversation Between Top Powers and Yasenia.Apr 4, 2024
- Chapter 781. Ascending to the Summit.Apr 3, 2024
- Chapter 780. Five Mountains.Apr 2, 2024
- Chapter 779. Soluna’s Developing Feelings.Apr 1, 2024
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I make it short.
1) Wholesome 2) Anti-routine xianxia 3) Wholesome s*xy scenes YURI / FUTA (really really really rare) 4) High-quality writing (If you want to recognize that in novels, it is usually from details, even the smallest ones) 5) Likeable EQ IQ characters 6) JP vibe (For info, works that fusion jp+chinese vibe are often good. Which is why some CNs that have a comedy kinda like Kazuma are high ranking. And why some jp works are better by having more description like a CN) 7) A good work is a work where you want to kidnap the author to write all the time
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This is rather... I don't quite want to call it wholesome because it's still very much smut, but it's quite comfortin to read. The main character has what I'd consider "the right" personality for a story like this and it seems like the author is committed to keeping the harem centred around a solid core of 5 girls. Each of them are lovely in their own way. I don't want to go into too much detail but they all have something that really draws you to them. I'm not even sure I could pick a best girl (that's somewhat a lie, I can, it's Cecille but I'm a sucker for her tropes and Angel is a close second).
The bad
The grammar is passable. It's something you can read certainly, but it isn't smooth. It's mostly minor grammar mistakes that inturrupt the flow of the story a bit but nothing so bad I was forced to stop reading. The cultivation is also pretty standard. I wouldn't call it "bad" per say but you've seen it a thousand times already.
The porn tags to watch out for
One final thing is that there are some... what I'll call "porn tags" to watch out for. I won't be going over everything, just the ones I think some people may have issues with. I have issues with none of them so... yeah
Futa, Futa on Futa, Incest (Mother-Daughter), Tail Play, Yuri (Girls Love)
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Edit: Note to self. Don't try to write a review when you're emotional.
I'll start out with the negative.
Almost 600 chapters into the story, and the author manages to invalidate about 90% of the main casts personalities and actions throughout the story and the precedents that's been set. I'm honestly confounded about what's going through the authors brain when writing this.
s*xual assault and even people being too aggressive in their approach towards the main cast have always been punished in some way, often harshly up to the point of torture. A physical AND mind rape attempt is made but everyone is magically okay with it because the person said they were sorry. Tje justification is that the person is very strong, which doesn't hold water as other times when it's been strong people they've just delayed their revenge.
It is so completely out of character and so poorly handled narratively that it's now impossible to tell how the MC will actually react in any given situation in the future.
Now, that's the negative out of the way. Unto the positive.
The main cast pretty much hits most of the kink spots for everyone. If you want a smut read that actually has plot, this is the place to be.
The author has quite a gift for imaginative fighting scenes, which never fails in impressing me.
The harem has been kept manageable and kept "real" with their own personalities, quirks, upsides and downsides. It's dynamic with all the positives and negatives. Although, sometimes I do think it's a bit on the "too rosy optimist" side with how divergent some of their personalities are, the author more often than not makes the conflict resolution believable.
One of the best things about the story, to me, is the continuous character development. How each member in the main cast grows and learn to deal with the new and old. That they learn the world isn't black and white, but tinged in greyscale.
Lastly, my biggest hope is that the author finds an editor. The book could use some love and attention to clean up some of the grammar and sentence structures, as it's very evident the author isn't a native English speaker. It would elevate the whole thing to a new level.
To cap it all off, an apology to the author for my original review:
Dear author. You didn't deserve what I dished out there and I'm so sorry for lashing out the way I did. It wasn't fair to you and it wasn't fair to an otherwise very good book.
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It's fun, it's well written, it has great world building, it has great s*x scenes🤭, and Bob is doing a terrible job fixing the fourth wall. What's not to like right? Right, stop reading this and go read...
What are you still doing here? (ಠ_ಠ) >⌐■-■ Go!!
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I really should be sleeping, but since I've decided to review another story, I suppose it's too late to jump off the train.
But I'll keep it short. I have a tendency to make it long and detailed. Forgive this scientist for trying to be thorough. In any event...
One— The author is very nice. I feel like it should be said.
Two— The story is very nice. There are occasional dark and tragic and ahahaha-punches-the-wall-meme moments, but the story is very fluff. And violent. Lots of violence. Hehehe...
Ahem... anyway, the grammar is acceptable. Some minor spelling stuff, but the author is very responsive. I think, now that I fell I must say it, that the word you're looking to replace this copious and, at this point, on-character use of "directly" is "instantaneously" or just "instantly". It means to be like the Flash and do very Ka-Chow! ™️ things. The way the story is written is very descriptive, detailing everything that's going on, but it's relatively straightforward, so if anything, it just makes you absorbed in the lore.
Three— The characters. Are. Adorable. I need a stable income so I can join patroon and give headpats. Each of the characters are unique, and provide something to the story, the MC, and the lore. I cannot say much to new readers, except do not be daunted by the 500+ chapters because you will love them all. Especially Yasenia. Especially cute cuddly growling Yassy. I would like to offer humble head pats. If the Queen would give it herself, this lowly mortal would be most delighted.
Four— The relationships are beautifully written. Not the best composition, or English for that matter, that I've read, but I love how the relationships are portrayed. The MC is LOYAL. She is also SMART. She is PRAGMATIC. And she would burn the world if that's what her lover wants. Because that's how it goes. Lovers are special. And on that topic, the MC does have very unique relationships built. I can't go into details, but I like how most people just argue about this and that while our MC is just built different. It's a spoiler, but you'll understand how I feel.
There is incest, but in a way that I've likely never seen before. "Am I your mother, or your lover?" It turns out there was a very easy answer, and people were just too dumb not to see it. Both. Both is good.
The MC doesn't constrain themselves to a singular title. She can have a relationship both as a lover and as a daughter. To be fair, when you think about it, they're not mutually exclusive. Yes, the love they give is fundamentally different, but the expressions of love are not particularly overriding. You can spoil your daughter, and give your love as a woman. You can dote on your lover, and you can still scold or praise them as a mother. The line is extended, perhaps, but it's not like there's a lower line on expressing your love. Her mother's take on relationships is also very unique. Very much how an extremely ol— EXPERIENCED! Extremely experienced young woman would view s*xual relationships. Even if she has to share her body, as long as her daughter's heart belongs to her, filial or otherwise, she doesn't mind her getting other lovers. And I mean lovers. She doesn't just go for anyone. She aims for long-standing commitment. Truly, built different
Our MC isn't a doormat, or a power creep either, she uses everything to her advantage, isn't afraid or pretentious, knows when to listen to advice, and knows to draw a line when it is needed.
Finally— The world building is great. Simply great. I'd recommend just reading it. It's not something that I can explain in a way where you will understand whether you will like it or not. Take the time. Breathe. Stretch. Hit the chapter 1 button.
This portion is a review about the more recent chapters. New arrivals shouldn't read this. It's not even a spoiler. You simply won't understand anything. If you haven't gotten to the ch 560~ part yet, perhaps skip this...
Skip it.
I have a lot of things to say, but the main one I want to talk about is Tengliu, the Harpy Matriarch. It would seem that we are finally seeing the first bout of a sustained violent reaction against her. Understandable. Still, hear me out:
Whatever the reasons for her trying to get close to Yasenia, whether or not it is justifiable for her redemption arc doesn't really matter. Yas is actively trying to make amends simply because there's no point in making a mountain out of a molehill. Yes, she was disrespectful, but what can she do? That's simply how she is. I know some will reason out that that's just using cultural barriers as a way out, and in a way, it is. Because it is a way out. Tengliu is much like Tatyana in this regard. Tatyana doesn't mind who Yas sleeps with for the most part as long as her bottom line is not crossed. Tengliu doesn't mind getting all touchy feely and making out as long as she feels comfortable with it. Though Tatyana's bottom line is that she cares for Yas, and only want Yas to care for her in return. Tengliu is much MUCH younger than Tatyana (Hey, I'm not mentioning your age, so don't break the fourth wall here) and is much more powerful than most, so her stance is more of the standard cultivator mindset: if it didn't work once, maybe you're not putting enough power into it. It's all about compromise, you can't expect to find exactly the right people and instantly clicking with them 100%. Yas didn't want a harem, but she compromised 5 girls. Tatyana put down the foot on the No-men policy. Tengliu wants to get it down. Has doesn't wanna. They'll work it out, and you can't do that while being grumpy about the past. Remember it, but don't dwell on it, as they say.
It seems distasteful, but that's called a cultural gap. Even if Tengliu doesn't find jumping on someone for some casual flings annoying, we, and certainly Yas, do. And even if we think it's perfectly fine to smack the annoying harpy who's senior by thousands of years just because Yas was insulted, Tengliu will certainly find that annoying. Why is the fly making a fuss, right? We have our set of methods to use and methods not to use. It's a "eww" moment to find someone using the latter, especially on yourself. But in any event, what happened, has happened. As the lore stands, Tengliu went too far, because she got too engrossed in her pride when Yas repelled her charm, and it just escalated from there, until our smart MC decided to be the big girl, and DEescalate (using some bigger gun diplomacy). From then on it's a matter of amending the relationship. If it falls through all the same, Yas will deal with it. She may avoid war, but it sure as heck doesn't mean she's not ready to double down. And maybe Yas doesn't like her, but if she doesn't make an effort, the hate won't shift. Someone has to take the first step, and clearly, grandma harpy has got too much face to admit loss, so she might as well be the one to step up. And clearly, it's working. Cute cuddly Yassy always works. How else did she make everyone stronger than her at her home bow at her feet? With purring, growling, and cuteness. Lots of cuteness. Cuteness defeats all evil. And who knows. Grandma harpy has long been in need of progeny. Perhaps once her redemption arc is over she can get in line for the Progenitor doing some, ahem... repopulation stuff. Blurb dragon when?
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I read on other website novel 10/10. The beast mother-daughter duo :). Xianxia + yuri + fluffy + incent = ultimate combo
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The best GL in this platform. 10/10 R18 scenes. Angel best girl. [Edit 17/6]: honestly this is the perfect harem style romance in this website (stealing spree in webnovel / YuuShou for jp syosetu even tho this MC brick wall brain ded) dude I feel like the author truly knows what he's doing, I just wanna cheer on the author since it is so rare that a harem story doesn't make u forget like half of the harem member and I believe that this novel should be in no.1 ranking best novel in this website no doubt. (Im kinda biased since the portal realm arc the first half kinda a slog to read through but the second half of that arc kinda safe it.)
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Now I like cultivation stories, ready many and I enjoyed most of them. Plenty were garbage but I still like them cause I guess I don't have taste? I just really enjoy reading. But this is fine. MC and main the cast are fun, the cultivation powers are neat and everything seems thought-out and structured.
Now this story does have smut. Personally I don't care for it? Wait not exactly correct ummm. How do I put this.. I don't hate smut at all, I really don't dislike most troops/tags/whatever really, its just if I'm reading a story I'm not looking for stories with it as the primary reason for me to read a story.
But I can see and understand that plenty don't like that sort of thing. However this story does have decent balance of it compared to others and it mostly only occurs when relevant enough. And sometimes it won't happen for large number of chapters cause it is isn't the time for it. But when it does occur it's well written I guess (like I said don't going out of my way looking for it, so don't have much to compare it too).
What else to say... hmm, the story is weirdly wholesome, each of the main cast has their own unique power set (which is good for cultivation story to have each character to have a moment to shine)
Overall I enjoy the story, good action, characters and plotline so far.
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This is a perfect novel in my opinion.
I read all 703 chapters available in 4-5 days, it was that good and addicting. I'm writing this the day after finishing it and I'm already having some light withdrawal symptoms. 🤣
I love how the harem is done, the girls are lovely. The fact that they are strong enough to be mostly independent and at the same time completely dependent on Yasenia's love is what I've been waiting for in a harem.
The smut scenes are excellent and even better than what I was expecting at the beginning. (I'd like more lovey-dove with Cecile though.)
The world building is so good that I can't even find a flaw.
The cultivation realms are well thought out. There is still a lack of explanation of each realm's requirements though, for example for the beasts, do they really just need to absorb energy passively or via beast cores or is there hidden requirements like bloodlines that create bottlenecks?
The combats are well written.
The professions are good.
There is a thing that went against what I would have expected though, and that's Sarah the otherworlder. What I was expecting to happen to her was completely not what happened. I was thinking that that she would become the exception for the harem limit but that she wouldn't have used the system for it. After joining the harem she wouldn't use the main features of the the system (harem building) which would at some point forcefully bend the system into evolving and changeing to accomodate Yasenia better, something like a lover system.
I don't mean that I'm unsatisfied with what really happened though, the arc against Sarah and their first meeting way back has done much to uncover some of Yasenia's personality. It might even help Yasenia begin the treatment of Tattana's heart demons, she had a trauma about systems if I remember right.
Overall 99, 9/100 because of there is still some minor grammatical mistakes, if Author can't afford an editor, there's a trick, go to chatgpt and enter the prompt [is there any mistakes in this text : " crlt+c, ctrl+v the chapter" ] and it will point out most of them. It's free and will correct the most glaring mistakes.
Anyway thx for reading me, hope you keep it up Author.
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I'll keep it simple for all yous eternally skeptical peoples. Dis, dis here is quality gold. 👌 I will admit, the relationships may be slightly unhealthy (primarily type 2 diabetic levels of sweet), but are SIGNIFICANTLY more fair and honest than far too many others. Love, relationships, boundaries, meaningful bonding, and connections are important parts of the plot; and honesty is almost mandatory. Just generally very good love all around, but, there is a fair amount of... obsession (many will die if it is for their dears, but lots of people die for worse, both in reality and in this). We got good action and the strength feels deserved for the most part. With unfathomable seniors, a laid out growth system, talent, and hard work, monstrous mc's and couples may emerge, and slowly climb their way to the top. (This is kinda a dark world but in the sense of, people with power in power doing very unfortunate things.)
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