Some readers may find flaws with MC leveling up too fast or receiving stats in a burst but I had a fun time reading this. Plus the author has done a really good job fitting in the gamer system into Naruto universe. The way details are presented are very good. At times I was certainly troubled by excessively long list of stats and skills but it has become better over time.

There have been some semi filler chapters I felt but author has kept a good pace overall and I'll continue to follow this as I feel it'll get even better in future. Definitely recommend this simply because it is a fun read plus there are wholesome moments and much less dark/gruesome details as of now

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BattlerY

Status: chapter 20 – one year training 01

Nov 12, 2022

The gamer system. Frankly speaking, not the most thought-out system. Rather one of the worst. And if you are already familiar with it, then half of the work is already familiar to you.

This could be compensated with good humor (failure), an interesting MC (failure), a unique view of the Naruto universe (failure) or an good storytelling (failure)...... You can safely skip paragraphs (or even chapters), and not miss anything important.

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BookTycoon

Status: chapter 88 – the truth is, my...

Aug 12, 2022

Great story really love how the story flows and how you insert the plot line, the power leveling of the MC is also within a reasonable range, though I recommend the author to lessen the chapters when MC is dungeon diving and use TIME SKIPS in it for better convince for the readers.

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SecondFlyingGoat

Status: c0129

Nov 12, 2022

Best Naruto-Gamer fanfic I read till now. (i have read dozens).

Even though story is a little slow paced (author keeps apologizing for it), it is NOT even tiny bit Boring. with great power levelling. I love it and hope to see more.

pray that the author does not drop

Really loved how the interactions between characters going...

Gamer interface is perfect and neat. (In most gamer fics, it usually kind of gets out of control as the story progresses... and become weird).

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mja

Status: c105

Sep 19, 2022

Among the sea of trash a hidden gem appears! I usually dislike fan fics but this one is unlike the rest. All the power ups seem to be well deserved and the character progression is seamless. The story is well written with no major plot holes or plot armor while still being true to the original. I can confidently say this is probably the best Naruto fan fic ever written.

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GreenJelly711

Status: --

Mar 2, 2022

I like the story so far, I get good vibes from it and think there is some potential for this to be good. I love the steady but fast pace you move your book it’s very enjoyable to read and keeps you entertained. Always love when authors have normal task to keep the MC doing. Makes the characters feel more alive. Overall, I think the story is starting off good enough, I'll continue reading to see where it goes.

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Titivillus

Status: chapter 57 – interlude 02 – daichi and the...

Dec 26, 2022

At the moment I'm writing this review the story is still at academy levels:Despite the autor writing well and consistency, the main character is uninteresting, but the main problem I have with this story is him borrowing the 'The Gamer' System but nerfing him in some areas that it's 'ok' but massively upgrading the bonus it gives in others that absolutelly doesn't make sense at the current skill level. The autor doesn't ponder much about the effects of % effects, buffs and debuffs, the real effects of some skills and passives, for example:

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The main character is not even a genin yet and he already have skills to negate %damage from any kind of damage up to 40%+ only by doing less training than rock lee and the skill is related to only his physical stats

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Another problem is the way some skills are presented they affect the MC in situations they shouldn't.

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The description of dual wielding imply that the effect can be used even without using two weapons at the same time with diferent hands

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These various problems in descriptions accumulate and make some situations make no sense after some time... Also, dungeons are not interesting and you can clearly skill the chapters of dungeons and just read his status update afterwards... I will not make critics about the MC not making the smartest choices in all situations because he is not really a genius not even from his previous life, at least he lacked motivation...

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LittleDemon47

Status: chapter 51

May 17, 2022

An awesome Naruto gamer fanfic, only issue from my side was complete status which would take more than half the chapter and dungeon fights getting longer which author already addressed in the latest chapter so 5 stars from me

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JoyBoy69

Status: chapter 1 – my second chance

Apr 3, 2022

It is a great story, the characters are well fleshed out and not just being cannon fodder, and his slow and steady development is great read

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Hulkbuster

Status: The Adventurous Gamer ninja

Nov 20, 2022

Really good plot and like the writing style. Found some original characters with good build up for them. New take on narutoverse from other fanfics in this category.

Humble request for more frequent updates.

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