First the positives,

1. The author is definitely good at writing smut scenes that isn't as smutty than the implies at the index.

2. Grammar corrections are few and far between, definitely easy to read in terms of grammar

The negatives,

Bianca getting angry with "They called me a demon, I'm just trying to exist" is basically the only reason something happens in this story...

1. Slow, the progression of arc 1 is fine. However, at the end of arc 1 and the start of arc 2 is such a slog to get through, especially the first combat of the MC doesn't feel like she did anything worth noting, in terms of her progression as killing a living being. Naive Protagonist Tag NEEDED STAT!

2. Very dumb MC and Dumb conflict catalyst, the stealing is very bad in terms of the readers view of the MC. Shuming has none to near zero of monologue in order to actually understand his viewpoint, it's basically just "SHE'S BAD! I KNOW IT" he doesn't even sound smart or anything. I don't even feel like he's motivated or anything. Its like "oh we're doing this again" after the 10th time of him showing up.

3. Characters that just show up without any information at all! Like I know is xianxia, but please give as a reason to remember a character's name if you saw fit to give them the name in the first place

4. Smut demands a lot and I mean A LOT! I don't want to have chapters and chapters of smut, but at the few times it appears, make it MORE! The author can do so much more, because I know they're good at smut. Please deliver to that tag.

Probably dropping this

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I liked it so far. The author excels at writing Smut scenes while even make simple things like kissing seem very emotional and erotic. The grammar seems fine and the worldbuilding was a bit basic but good enough considering the genre.

 Give it a shot.

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A lot of what this novel does is actually pretty fun but a combination of a very incompetent MC - especially the rampant stealing which is just a bad plot device to force conflict - a forced plot progression in the first 3 arcs, and a surprising amount of idiots really begins to sour a lot of the chapters. Also, there was one example of a kink-heavy smut scene (Smelling kink) that should have been - but wasn't - disclosed of in any way, though this is a more minor complaint.

Arc 3 was a minor improvement over the prior arcs and arc 4 felt quite refreshing with an interesting start to arc 5 for now, so I have chosen to increase my rating from the original 3 stars to 4. Hope the story continues to improve in the future but I really can't see myself rating this higher unless the MC changes quite drastically. I like the system and the cultivation parts are kinda interesting, at least.

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I would really appreciate it if you could name your chapters like how you did in your other novel. 

Other than that everything is good. I'd 100% recommend this novel to anyone who is interested.

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