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Bow and Arrow
Bow and Arrow
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A life full of regrets.. but no sight of the fallen heart of a man.

Where did everything go wrong? What happened?! What did this... who did this...
What did I do?
...
A 23 year old in the life of a walking dead (or a neet), disinterested in modern life and oblivious to the wonders of humanity. Finds a Path.
...
"The internationally renown game company Crestfallen Industry has finally revealed the release date of Rising Essence!!"
"O-o-ooh?! What is this?! CEO of Crestfallen Industry, aka K. Crestfallen, has just revealed the release date for RE?! Just 3 weeks! In 3 weeks the 1,500 years of technology and planning has now come to being! We, the citizens of the New Earth in the 20th century will be the first to witness it!"
"K. Crestfallen has revealed the date for Rising Essence this morning in his account at 9:37 am, did he thought he was slee..."
"The most advanced technology will see light in 3 weeks at..."
...
'Huh?'
Eyes opened wide, disbelief crossing his entire being, the man with a regretful life made a call from the ultimate generation phone he never uses and traditionally throws away after a few days.
Heavy but slow breathing sounded and the tone of the phone marking, then picked up. "M..."
"..."
"..."
"...Yes?"
Taking an inaudible deep breath, he continues. "M-Mom, I'd like to get something..."

Something he had not the need nor will to ask for in more than a decade was once again heard from his mouth.

[Incest tag is NOT for parentxchild, *so as to avoid confusion*, there are 9 volumes and extra stories with (almost( each volume having 100 chapters (V8 50 chapters and V9 11 chapters.]

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AdultEcchiFantasyHaremLitRPGMatureMysteryRomanceSci-fi
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Alternate World Anti-social Protagonist Apathetic Protagonist Beautiful Female Lead Calm Protagonist Character Growth Cheats Complex Family Relationships Cunning Protagonist Depictions of Cruelty Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Fat to Fit Incest Love Interest Falls in Love First Maids Older Love Interests Overpowered Protagonist Past Plays a Big Role Psychic Powers Slow Romance Unique Weapons Virtual Reality Weak to Strong Younger Love Interests
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    ZeleniyKrokodil
    Status: chapter 6 — encounter and levelling

    Briefly: Take a look at the surrealism on the cover - it will describe all the phantasmagoria in the work and the mess in the writer's head. Turbidity, headaches, irritation are guaranteed.

    Long:

    The narration is sharp, twitchy, chaotic. It is impossible to read, so I refuse it.

    Also I put 2/5, which only sh*tty works get from me. This is also on a par with works about R-18 relationships between gays, which, as a straight person, are of no interest to me at all. Only pure slag and plagiarism can fall below.

    The only reason it's not 1/5 is the difference between the top ten chapters and the 160 chapters I looked at. And there are improvements, but it's still at the level of research material.

    Reading a work is as difficult as theories and proofs in higher mathematics and sub-atomic physics. But if with mathematics and physics the difficulty lies in the fact that knowledge itself makes you dizzy. In this work, the problem is already in the method of transmitting information.

    Of course, even without this massive fact, the work could hardly be considered something close not only to a masterpiece, but even just to a good work.

    Implausible reactions and behavior. Excessive plot armor. "Smart", but damn stupid GG. Too much rush in the story.

    Why is only one method of connecting to VR worth it, which contradicts the very loshika of a quality product (gloves... really?).

    To sum up, there is nothing to read yet.

    Until the author sits down and edits his sur to readability, while spending about a couple of months, this work can not even be touched.

    Since in the current state, I can only say one thing: "Even my five-year-old drafts written on my knee look more readable than this..." And this comment is not so easy to earn.

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    DarkenedFairy
    Status: c idk

    It seems that I can't rate this without putting it in my reading list, but it's a 2/5. Yes I know you are supposed to read at least 50 chapters before reviewing, but im breaing that rule for this book. So first impessions, it's chaotic, messy, and doesn't make sense. If you want to read this book start at the mid way point of Chapter 4. Anything before will RUIN your reading experience. I would recomend to just remove those chapters. For the writing, there is too much detail in the book. You are just trying to add random filler (you did admit to this). It's the worst filler as any other book has better filler than this. Other book adds useless things that keep people somewhat entertained. But this filler is called detail. Too much detail, half of the chapters is detail of this or that, might as well make a comic book it might be better.

    For the Author if you are reading this, Don't write in first person for the first novel. If you do, I recomend to read Andur's Novels on RRL, they are gold and will help you understand what you need and dont need in a first perosn book. Starting with 3rd person you can pick RSSG to read. It had a lot of filler, but it's the ones that you can ignore and read through. Good Luck!

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    Kyanos
    Status: chapter 2 — living the life

    this may or may not be an interesting series. I say that because I literally can't read it. It's in English, but I am barely able to process what's happening much less to who. The grammar is not english as far as I can tell, the words used are accurate but not good in context. 

    skipped to the latest chapter and it doesnt look like it cleans up much so I'm going to have to drop.

    if this thing gets some TLC from an editor or something I'll check it out again, but as is I literally cannot read this without getting a headache

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    Hendro
    Status: chapter 362 — descending lightning of the...

    This novel can be quite confusing in the beginning and takes awhile for everything to start coming together, but the author seriously work hard, in the development, immersion and world building which many authors don’t do, which makes the wait all worth it. 

    It’s exciting seeing the protagonist achievements and his time with his harem. And I hope to keep reading more of them. 

    Thanks for the hardwork author.

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