Briefly: Take a look at the surrealism on the cover - it will describe all the phantasmagoria in the work and the mess in the writer's head. Turbidity, headaches, irritation are guaranteed.

Long:

The narration is sharp, twitchy, chaotic. It is impossible to read, so I refuse it.

Also I put 2/5, which only sh*tty works get from me. This is also on a par with works about R-18 relationships between gays, which, as a straight person, are of no interest to me at all. Only pure slag and plagiarism can fall below.

The only reason it's not 1/5 is the difference between the top ten chapters and the 160 chapters I looked at. And there are improvements, but it's still at the level of research material.

Reading a work is as difficult as theories and proofs in higher mathematics and sub-atomic physics. But if with mathematics and physics the difficulty lies in the fact that knowledge itself makes you dizzy. In this work, the problem is already in the method of transmitting information.

Of course, even without this massive fact, the work could hardly be considered something close not only to a masterpiece, but even just to a good work.

Implausible reactions and behavior. Excessive plot armor. "Smart", but damn stupid GG. Too much rush in the story.

Why is only one method of connecting to VR worth it, which contradicts the very loshika of a quality product (gloves... really?).

To sum up, there is nothing to read yet.

Until the author sits down and edits his sur to readability, while spending about a couple of months, this work can not even be touched.

Since in the current state, I can only say one thing: "Even my five-year-old drafts written on my knee look more readable than this..." And this comment is not so easy to earn.

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It seems that I can't rate this without putting it in my reading list, but it's a 2/5. Yes I know you are supposed to read at least 50 chapters before reviewing, but im breaing that rule for this book. So first impessions, it's chaotic, messy, and doesn't make sense. If you want to read this book start at the mid way point of Chapter 4. Anything before will RUIN your reading experience. I would recomend to just remove those chapters. For the writing, there is too much detail in the book. You are just trying to add random filler (you did admit to this). It's the worst filler as any other book has better filler than this. Other book adds useless things that keep people somewhat entertained. But this filler is called detail. Too much detail, half of the chapters is detail of this or that, might as well make a comic book it might be better.

For the Author if you are reading this, Don't write in first person for the first novel. If you do, I recomend to read Andur's Novels on RRL, they are gold and will help you understand what you need and dont need in a first perosn book. Starting with 3rd person you can pick RSSG to read. It had a lot of filler, but it's the ones that you can ignore and read through. Good Luck!

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this may or may not be an interesting series. I say that because I literally can't read it. It's in English, but I am barely able to process what's happening much less to who. The grammar is not english as far as I can tell, the words used are accurate but not good in context. 

skipped to the latest chapter and it doesnt look like it cleans up much so I'm going to have to drop.

if this thing gets some TLC from an editor or something I'll check it out again, but as is I literally cannot read this without getting a headache

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This novel can be quite confusing in the beginning and takes awhile for everything to start coming together, but the author seriously work hard, in the development, immersion and world building which many authors don’t do, which makes the wait all worth it. 

It’s exciting seeing the protagonist achievements and his time with his harem. And I hope to keep reading more of them. 

Thanks for the hardwork author.

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